|Reviews for Pweeease?|
| vanity p chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
really think about what dark is asking her...OH!speaking of dark...isn't it supposed to darsh/dark shnider,ohhhhhhhh, i get it (some times i just think i'm waaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyy to...vanity? nah,...)*spread this around* SOME ONE PWEEEEASE MAKE FAN FIC AN D (vampire hunter d) AND ARSHES!
THIS FIC IS VERY...GREATE!
| Miu Takayama chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
hahahahahahaha I love it! hahahahaha
| SesshyGal chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
lol very cute and i don't think Dark would do that but what the hack u did great on it man keep up the good work
| suteko1 chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
oh this was a cute giggle. And asking a woman to give up one of her chocolates! Yeah he deserved the slap.
| VampiresTears chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
That was the best! I laughed so hard.
| Alia Sukai chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
haha awesome oneshot! u spelled everythin rite
:D keep on making more
| crimsonkristlerose chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Just wanted to stop by and say. Read your one-shot it was to funny I almost woke all my students reading it. Loved it!
| MamaJMarie chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Yes, you have the names spelled right. very amusing.
| Boudicca of Green chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
Oh my god, this is so cute! I can just see them!
| Daniil chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
Yoko? In a long skirt? Be ye daft?
| Platapuss chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
uhhg i love bastard and i love this pairing and i wish there were more fics for the series!
heheh sexual innuendos in the form of chocolate.
| kathyy chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
oh my god so funny! hahaha.. that was so good and really interesting.
| Scan chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
In the act of registering, I found out that someone else on this site uses tha pen-name 'Scan' so now you know it ain't me. Ah well. Funny fic, never seen the show, but your fic was nicely written. All the best ;)
| Morrigan the Nightmare Queen chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
Okay, DS was out of character. I can't see him begging. On the other hand, you have created a funny, funny little story here, and I can see Yoko wearing the pants in that relationship. (Relatively speaking. I'm sure DS still rocks her world on a regular basis, wink wink nudge nudge.)
Your punctuation was a little iffy in a couple of places, but . . . hey, I'm not the Fiction Police. This was a hilarious little tale, and I look forward to seeing more of the same. If you wanted to expand on this scenario, you could say that Yoko's so cranky because she's pregnant- and then run away with that. ("But I cast the protection spell, Yoko! Honestly!" "AND WHAT? I'M THE ONE HAVING THIS BABY, YOU BASTARD, AND IF ITS FATHER DOESN'T SHUT HIS MOUTH HE WON'T HAVE ONE!" and so forth.)
| manjy chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
hey a short story but really funny and humorous! keep up the good work! and i liked how you only revealed what dark schneider wanted towards the end. pretty comical reversal of expectations!