Reviews for The Shadow
goldensunrocks chapter 14 . 7/4/2007
this story gets better with every chapter, hehehe, hiya i have to admit with jelousy that your a fantastic writer, your wordplay and polts are great, something i wished i had, hahahaha, keep you the great work and thank you for the entertaning story, looking for to the next chapter
Karai chapter 14 . 7/4/2007
Uhm... well lets see... tail, looks a bit of elegant, I think it's the greek titan from Age of Mythology Titans!

If not than I have no idea... oh well, great story *holds up clipboard hoping that you will set your autograph* and update soon
kuja's pain chapter 13 . 7/2/2007
i love this story, you made it really interesting the way Goku can't use his Ki, plz update it, i BEG you, hehehe. And you gave Goku a sense of humour and made him SMART, brillant

keep it up
CoLLiSiOn chapter 13 . 6/6/2007
How about an update? Please? Pretty please? I'm dieing to know what happens next man! Don't keep us in suspense any longer now!

- CoLLiSiOn
adlex47 chapter 13 . 6/1/2007
hey this is a great story it shows goku is not dumb and things 113 (ive seen vegeta ask goku that in quite a few fan fics) and that he can be ruthless and a little mroe saiyan like
troubles chapter 13 . 4/29/2007
Good chapter hope you update soon
avidgokufan chapter 13 . 4/22/2007
Yay an update! So...I would have reviewed sooner, but fanfiction's story alert seems to be down. I didn't know you updated until I checked my reviews and noticed that the story was updated! It's getting exciting. continue!
CoLLiSiOn chapter 12 . 2/5/2007
OMG! Im so happy u updated, i thought u quit on us lol Very good chapter none the less! Update ASAP!

- CoLLiSiOn
avidgokufan chapter 12 . 2/2/2007
All I can say is:

It's about time!

Heh heh, who am I kidding, I have no room to talk! Anyway, thanks for updating. I was a little disappointed you let Gohan punch his stepfather. I wanted Goku to be the one to punch his lights out, but that's okay. Keep up the good work. I enjoyed it.
die welt is fast schnaps chapter 12 . 2/2/2007
hey!feels so good to read your stuff again,really been missing ya!I'm also into the finals,but it's only one week and three tests left and then I will be free...hope you get over with it as soon as I ...FINALLY! poor Goten...had to wait for the truth for quite a while.I'm so anxious how this will end!gmk
raditz65 chapter 12 . 2/2/2007
Better late than never right lol

but on a serious note as always a great chapter
raditz65 chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
i cant wait until u get back on this story its really interesting
Shara chapter 11 . 10/26/2006
Totally rockin story. Poor innocent Goku is now a extremely awesome fighter(not that he wasnt one before). Try giving him a long sword in the next chapters or something. It should be the perfect weapon for him.
raditz65 chapter 11 . 8/23/2006
come back and update soon
avidgokufan chapter 11 . 7/25/2006
YAY! That was great. Still a bit too much swearing...but I'm so glad you decided to continue this story. It's been a while, though I guess I can't talk! Keep going! LEt GOku kill the jerks!
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