Reviews for Reality
pebblekit chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
How... deep. This was written very well. If it had been any longer, the tone would have been ruined. I like how he didn't even say Ryo's name. Very cool. I'd like to see more writing from you.
Hagar chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
Short enough that, if you played more with the editing, it could almost be a poem: it's just long enough to be called a drabble.

For a first fic you've got good rythm and good flow (and a relatively good capture of Koji's voice), and length is something that comes with practice.