Reviews for Payback
TheCauldron chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
Loved it! Brilliantly written!
PoshKimberlee chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
I liked this story there should be a sequel he see her later on in life or she's in pitch black or tcor
Lov2CUFade chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
I cannot get over how sweet this story is. Very very good job
x3bezzecks chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
I really liked the story. The girl wasn't like every other girl romance with Riddick. Every story I've read has some female version of Riddick that gets annoying. I liked that you took a normal person and placed her into his life.
Karikocha chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Fanastic read. Lovely writting.
silverclaw13 chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
So. Very. Sweet. And not Mary Sue at all.

I love Riddick. He single-handedly carried Pitch Black, and there should be more good fic written with him in mind. Just like this one. More? :)
Shadowdancer18 chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
Nice, very nice.
bessalin chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
The first word that popped in my head after I finished reading: AW! Seriously, this was brilliant.
Jacki-maliska chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
i like her...
Erisah Mae chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
lol I love it!

i was afraid that this would end up being an OOC Mary Sue, but it worked... I reckon this is heaps mad.

No really!

Loveit!

Erisah
cccbluesky chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Wow, what a lovely fic!

The smut really got me going and I really got into Riddick's and Arenna's relationship in their short encounter.

Splendid job!

Thanks

Blue
Goomba chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Oh how perfect. Nothing could be more so. And a Mary Sue at that. But it was soo very VERY Riddick and soo very VERY right. (And soo very VERY WET! Hehehe.) I praise you and your mind.

Cheers Jen
AngelKougaeri chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
Beautiful, that was totally brilliant writing!

AnGeL -x-
BatPhace chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
I was riffling through some archived stuff and found this. Normally I don't like Mary Sues but this one is so well written that i had to review. Wouldn't mind seeing something come of this, a sequel perhaps, or continuance? Maybe not, anyway, well done. ~Batty
lamyka chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
i dunno why but this story really resonates with me. i like the idea of it as well as the fact that it's a one shot. good work.

good luck with other stories,

lamyka
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