sorry for not reviewing earlier but this was a FANTSTIC story and i cried for spike

I have to say this is one of the best stories I could and definitly will read again and again

Wow... That's a great story. I was hoping for some Spuffy lovin but alas I appreciate the longer story so I can't complain. Thanks for sharing.

wow. thank you so much for this wonderful story. I'm so glad I found it

I really enjoyed this. Had me on the edge of my seat

This was a seriously awesome story! Your writing style's so readable and eloquent; to be honest I kept finding myself jealous while I read lol.

But seriously, I loved the plot and the way you made this return to the past and changing of events seem so realistically possible. It's obvious you put real thought and effort into using details from the episodes and it was really cool to see how the different characters reacted and felt towards this different Spike.

Wow keep up the good and awesome work

I love this story! Please do a sequel?

Not a bad story at all. It was a bit like "Hey you got porn in my plot." near the end there but over all you kept it reasably tastful. I really can't see a Spike going back in time working out well for him at all to be honest. It's not just becasue of his natually bad luck either. I think the pacing of the show didn't really leave him a good place to travel back too. Maybe Prauge, leaving him too disoriented to save Drucilla because when it comes down to it She is the deciding factor whith a time traveling Spike. Take him back to his introduction and you have him taking care of her. I guess you could do it belivably after he is confined to the chair. That would give him time to plan but again too eairly and you got Dru being able to read him and know he isn't hers. Depositing Spike in any other encounter would also not pace well, maybe during lover's walk after the big dust up. That would git him free of Dru, set about getting the ring while everyone things him gone, maybe even helping out against the mayor in some way. But after that all of his interacting with the scoobies are with them hating his guts.

But I got off on a rant that is not really realvent to this story. Aside from the time travel wish deposting him in School Hard this story is a decent read. You had a few points where I was all like "That so wouldn't happen." Kissing Buffy in the hallway, instantly making her go gaga over him wasn't really belivable. The scean where she shoves her hand down his pants, ok while I could see that happening, as she did wear just a rain coat to saduce Xander during his love spell and was going to take him in the librairy I couldn't however see that happening without the use of a spell to lower her inabitious in some way. Once the romance got up and going however you flowed smoothy so no further critic from there. I even like how you did the whole smooshed Buffys with her vision quest. It was well played, the advice was a bit hokie but it sorta worked. Also kinda like the sword. The idea behind it was also belivable. Even if Spike didn't keep it for the powers it has in hurting him it was still a rather interesting idea.

So over all I guess I just want to say Thank you for the story. It was a fun read.

Wow!

This story made me cry... nice work!

That was beautiful! No it was awesome! No no it was bloody brilliant! Thank you so much for sharing! I truly loved it!

great story :) Loved it

Lovely! I really like that Spike has another chance to make everything right here... XD

The fact that a magnificent story such as this doesn't have more reviews is criminal. It's engaging, intriguing, and most of all, hot as hell.