Reviews for Red Bolt of Lightning
stylo1 chapter 7 . 4/12
does it bother you that he is my heir?
yes, i dont want to kill anyone
so if it is his heir or not doesnt matter he just doesnt want to kill anyone. i gues you see where im going with this, you say one thing and awnser the next its like everyone is talking to themself
did you sleep well
yes breackfast was fine
lets go to class
yes im going to hogmeade
best friends?
sure, i hate you
stylo1 chapter 6 . 4/12
nice a potiom that removes all trackers and wards etc, ofc if you first travel everywhere you gonna stay wait 2 days and then drink it its kinda useless.
my brother sucks at potions and i useally sit next to him in class. that would almost make you a twin for sure seeing as how small the wizard world is its a piss poor choise. but why brother? why not friend? why not because i am brewing
Vampireking40 chapter 1 . 11/1/2017
Amelia actually has nothing to do with grades. She is head of law enforcement.
Guest chapter 18 . 10/9/2017
Sorry, just don't like the story line. This is a flame. It's like no challenges 4 harry. The love interest is a bit bland 4 me. I mean they act more like friends than potential love interest, everyone has the same personalty except 4 Dumbeldore and Voldemort. The only thing diffrent with each charcter is what they're going through and they're skills. Ron could be harry if he was taught by the founders and vise versa
HumANToid chapter 2 . 9/5/2017
it's Knight Bus by the way..
HumANToid chapter 1 . 9/5/2017
yes Amelia Bones work at the Ministry, but she is Head of DMLE, and shouldn't be the one who sign OWLs results.
its should be Griselda Marchbanks, Governor of Wizarding Examinations Authority.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 14 . 6/21/2017
I still would have had to break both shapes arms, and both legs for his little stunt. Gawd what an arsehole
stacygrrl2002 chapter 13 . 6/21/2017
Hedwig was probably my favorite in the entire series, and the thousands of fanfics I have read
stacygrrl2002 chapter 12 . 6/21/2017
Gideon black?
stacygrrl2002 chapter 11 . 6/20/2017
I have been wondering why mark is not given more to do. Maybe at least the non wanded courses. Maybe charms since he did transfiguration. Or more transfiguration. In depth or battle.
BillBrink chapter 18 . 2/7/2017
A real entertaining work! But I hope you didn't just leave it without a sequel. I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Xyori Nadeshiko chapter 15 . 1/31/2017
Es un fic muy divertido y entretenido me gusta!
emmalilly21 chapter 18 . 12/8/2016
This was nice. I liked it. I especially like that snape has a twin. Haven't seen that anywhere before.
emmalilly21 chapter 10 . 12/7/2016
First, I'm pretty sure Harry's grandmother is Dorea Black. Second, this story is just chock full of substance without overdoing it on the words. I'm loving it.
julesa66 chapter 17 . 11/8/2016
I am glad that you had someone unknown to be Harry's girlfriend. It gets tiring of it always being the same ones all of the time. Stories don't have to be canon. There is always ways to make up your own or add different plots and characters. This is a great story.
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