Reviews for Red Bolt of Lightning
jchangpa chapter 18 . 4/14
Well I was specting better thing from the story. I really complete the reading think that it will get moving to the good side, but never happen. The story start to dye as soon as you write that Harry and Snape were relative and dye completely when you pair Inteligent people with a pieces of trash. So not reading the sequel it 's not going to be good at all. Only regular part no Ginny / Harry pairing.
Ren O'neil chapter 17 . 4/10
answer: shadow
fantasyman97 chapter 18 . 3/21
you are very talented. i my self am a writer i hope you buy my books when they come out the first one will be The Phone Call of fate. i give you my permission to write fan fiction about them when they come out.
Sophia chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
I really like your story, but there are just some minor spelling errors, like the second "fault" is currently "vault", while there is a silent "K" in Night bus (Knight bus). Nothing to worry about, though
thisiscorinth chapter 17 . 11/9/2013
Is it shadow?
anonymous chapter 2 . 8/18/2013
this is my fourth time reading this fanfiction story and i love it but i do feel the need to point out that Amelia bones is not in charge of the students results she's the head of the DMLE forgot what it means but it has something to do with aurors
An-Angels-Lily chapter 6 . 4/2/2013
Great so far
lordanubis6238 chapter 18 . 3/26/2013
great story can't wait to read the rest
Guest chapter 10 . 3/11/2013
Second cousin once removed actully, third cousin is Snapes son/daughter to Harry
SuperSaiyanTeemo chapter 18 . 2/10/2013
Great story
Swiftclaw7 chapter 12 . 1/21/2013
DUDE THIS STORY IS AWESOME!
at first I'm like- meh
After reading atleast 4 chapters- WICKED!
I love the second part of the riddle thing to. Is Moony going to vist The Hideaway at all? Cause that would be pretty cool.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! Swiftclaw7
Sayakra chapter 18 . 1/20/2013
Is there a sequel? I really liked your story,
although Snape seemed to turn into a softy very quickly.
Malix2 chapter 18 . 12/6/2012
Excellent story so far. I'm going to go read the sequel now. :)
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
Larisya chapter 8 . 11/3/2012
I. Am. Going. To. Kill. Helga. Very. Very. Soon. She. Is. Annoying!
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