|Reviews for Xanadu|
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/16
I will attempt to make a second correction of French in your work: I believe that "Mes jeunes qui errent le prince" means " my young who errant the prince", which obviously doesn't make sense.
I think it should be something along the lines of "Mon jeune prince errent" (as she is solely talking to gambit right?).
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/16
Oh gods! A Macbeth quote. Read on Macduff! I thought I was the only one to obsess over Shakespeare (especially that play. I have to admit that I memorised the entire cauldron scene for fun. - I don't really have a life aside from being a bibliomaniac)
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/16
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think you mean: "belle femme", not "beau femme". Femme is feminine, and beau is masculine, whereas belle is feminine. If you used a masculine term to discribe a woman, they might find it insulting.
| Paulina Ann chapter 36 . 10/31/2014
Loved the story. Going to take a look at some of your others.
| Paulina Ann chapter 2 . 10/30/2014
Wow, never saw the witness protection program coming. Very clever.
| Mari Wollsch chapter 36 . 7/19/2014
| KiraLocket96 chapter 36 . 5/28/2014
LOOOOOOOVED IT! Great story telling! XD
| skaldsircha chapter 36 . 2/26/2014
Alara, I read all of Xanadu in 3 days, on the first day, I agonized that I was catching up to the present in terms of years. With apparently 1 or 2 years between each chapter. I think it was her doing the Christmas Song, and I realized how quickly this story had become precious to me. I didn't want to lose it and joined the site.
Yesterday, I was day-dreaming of cleaning up the spelling and publishing it on a very small scale, maybe as part of a private collection in print. Not to get your hopes up over anything, I rarely finish any project I start, ever. I still have that quiver I poured my heart and hands into from 3 years ago that is awaiting the final steps.
You do need to clean up the combat scene when Rogue gets kidnapped the second time. Usually I can follow the most convoluted story as long as it's clear, but you really lost me, and if you lost me, you probably lost most of your readers on that scene.
Also the page before that wasn't seamless writing it just sort of jumps like maybe something didn't paste into it correctly? The same thing happened early on around chapter I want to say it was chapter 3, or maybe chapter 5. I'd probably have to go back and read it again to find it.
| BD-Z chapter 36 . 2/13/2014
Beautiful, wonderful story. This was a great read through and through. I really enjoyed it. I have spent a good chunk of years away from my favorite couple but this story brought back my love of Romy. Thank you so much for writing this story and for following through with an excellent, exciting plot.
| Guest chapter 28 . 1/26/2014
que lindo esse conto ...
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/25/2014
estou adorando :D
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/22/2014
| kaiirine chapter 36 . 10/7/2013
At the beginning of the story i thought it was too normal for mutants like rogue and gambit but as it progressed the story became exciting and i loved it. thank u for writing this piece.
| Tzarista chapter 36 . 10/3/2013
great story :-)
| a chapter 2 . 8/9/2013
Witness Protection is actually US Marshal's not the Federal Bureau. But it's interesting so far.