|Reviews for Addendum|
| Gentle Kit chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Very cute and sweet. Loved the characterization.
| yumeniai chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
okay, that was weird and random.
| une valentine chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
Aw! I love Genma/Hayate! And I loved when Hayate pounced. Wouldn't have thought he could have done that, either. xD
| lily23 chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
That was cute.
| Nezuko chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
This was really wonderful. And unexpected. Even when all the world pairs Genma with Hayate, this came across as something fresh and new and out of the ordinary. I had a broad grin reading it the whole way through, and the closing sentiment was so delightful. "It's a ninja thing, you'll learn about it when you're older." caries so much sentiment in the subtext between these two characters, Genma's extraction of a promise, JHayate's willingness to give it. It really got right in under my skin. Lovely work.
| Renn chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
| Yuen-chan chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
I adore those two, and I adore the way you portray them. _
| link no miko chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
squeak loves fluff. squeak loved this fluff. squeak loves Chev's writing.
And let's stop the third person now, shall we?
Loved Genma's line about being a ninja and lying and all that. Dunno why, just. Loved.
I miss Hayate again now though. -_-x
Thank you for the fic! *huggles* And you didn't think I would read it. -x
| UE chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
*melts into goo*
now all you need is a genma/kakashi fic...*whistles innocently*
| kimi no vanilla chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Your Genma is so... GENMA. And your Hayate is just. Aww. I love them. It seems like it should be impossible to make anything with Hayate into fluffy bunnies but you just keep doing it. XD
| Sailor Comet chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
I like this. Anything with Hayate is just tragic by virtue of having Hayate, yannow, but your Genma brings it back up to something happier. _
| spork ai chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
This was so kawaii! I really like your fics, you're a very good auther, keep it up!