Reviews for Wrong
I LV PAUL SLATER XXX chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
That was IMMENSE !
fiz chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Gotta say that i totally agree with you, i thought paul and suze were completely meant to be :/ and jesse was meant to move on D: AMAZING WRITING THERE HONEY! XD x
Literati Lover chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
I loved this, and I'm totally a Jesse/Suze fan...but I also like Paul! If only she could have two guys lol
hey chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
uhh. i think it was pretty good but you should so write this in Pauls POV i mean everyone loves SuzexJesse but we all get a bit of a thrill from SuzexPaul. u got alot goin for u there just don't let it go to waste.
Graffigraphy chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Ooh, this was pretty hot. It made me want to write my own Mediator fanfiction. You definitely conveyed chemistry through your writing - good job! Now if only I could write this way... ]
pumpkinhead chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
yeah, kissing is better than the punching in the chest thing :D

so i like your version better
Ariadne'sThread chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
That is so not crap. Honestly, I prefered the original (probably because Paul/Suze works better when Paul makes the first move) but this is still incredibly good.
starcatcher54 chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
Purple Rhapsody chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
That was so not crap, it was Suze/Paul at one of its best!

~Purple Rhapsody~
TheSoulmater chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
OMG! This is actually exactly how I wanted it to go at that scene, that would have been perfect! Then Suze actually hitting him then, when he was on the ground with her would have been better rather than just sucker-punching him.

As I have said before you are a genius!

And poor Paulie I bet he was hurt when he realised that she didn't like him! *hugs paulie* Don't worry Paulie we LOVE you! lol!


OnceaSuperWhoLockian chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
ok um wow, you deff should not have stoped their. rewrite the whole damn book if you want (obveously the actual book will still b loved) but this is taking some very iteresting turns! love it!
Susie Madison chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
Um Lolly,

I have to say that you were so right and this story really did suck. I am soory but I as you said could feel my intelligence melt away. it was pretty scary.

Did you actually byr that I LOVED this I really want you to add on and rewrite the whole book 6 but only have Suze end up with Paul and not Jesse becuase I am totally with you on the whole 'people dissing Paul bad' thing.

so please do that cause it would be really good idea

do it (and not that kind of it)

luv Suze
mean-girl123 chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
wot u talkin abt? i luvd it.
hazel-dream chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
i have read this like...ten times. the first time i read it was on Meg Cabot's site's HOT!

very well done
the-apocalypse-is-near chapter 1 . 5/11/2005
It's not ttl crap. It's good!
44 | Page 1 .. Last Next »