|Reviews for Shadow Claw|
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/13
You somehow managed to make jounin level abilities slower than anything I've ever seen before, seriously. If darkness has used the "best illusions" on him then why couldn't he break out of that one much quicker, while I understand why she didn't attack, what I don't understand is why all the fights in this story are so slow. It feels like a turn based fight, one launches a jutsu then the other, repeat, add some feet and random yelling and bam. I'm not trying to flame, but you should be able to pick up these inconsistencies and weirdness and make a better story in the future.
Model people would say in response "but I receive tons of support", but that is not due to quality but rather pairings, romance, and "coolness" in a story.
Do not fall for their shallow reviews that, for some of the time, are for a reason different from quality and more for shock value/surprise something happened they remotely liked.
| 321Z3R0 chapter 4 . 6/18/2014
I never understood the whole "pervert hate" thing that many characters seem to have. Seriously, everyone is entitled to being a pervert when the choose, and they shouldn't be hurt or threatened because someone is being a hypocrite. Although Jiraya does take it a bit far with his constant peeping, it's fine to write those books, and to read them in public. I've seen so many stories where there is so much unnecessary hate from females on guys like Jiraya or Kakashi. Reading porn in public doesn't hurt anyone, and kids would learn about it eventually. Oh well, it's still a good story. I just felt as though I had to get the mini-rant out.
| missymoo11 chapter 6 . 11/22/2010
| Khaotic Order chapter 4 . 6/17/2010
| god of all chapter 29 . 7/4/2009
Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.
| joe1402 chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
great 1st ch i see that you stopped writting thats to bad could have made a good story. but if you do descide to update caint wait to read it.
| Dustin Ambrollo chapter 29 . 9/29/2008
| l'm ur conscience chapter 9 . 5/5/2008
You don't have to read this, but I stopped reading after you created a new tribe and made Hinata marry Naruto,
Reason is, that this story sort of turned out as a unoriginal or cliche story where Naruto is told that he has a long lost family out there, where he has brothers and sisters and cousins that he never knew and was never told for his "safety"
And the marriage between Naruto and Hinata was way too abrupt, one moment, they're scared to change close to each other and the next, they're married.
Do not consider this as a flame, just constructive critisicm
| Jiran chapter 29 . 4/29/2008
| panther73110 chapter 15 . 4/7/2008
I was wondering if you are going to update this story anytime soon or have you quit writing?
| CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 6 . 2/17/2008
Someone by the name of Elemental Balance and is the author of Forsaken plagerised your Shadow Skills. Read the last chapter and you will see what I mean.
| deathgeonous chapter 29 . 12/10/2007
Wow. Good fic. Just one question. Is this truely finished? It would seem so, but you never marked it as compleate, so...
Well anyways, thanks for writing this in the first place, bye for now.
| Dark Inu Fan chapter 29 . 11/13/2007
I’m so glad that Naruto was able to recover from being possessed by the Kyuubi for the second time. I can see Naruto’s tribe and Konoha quickly becoming allies in the future. If Naruto ever learns the hand style, he could quickly become one of the most powerful shinobi in history, if he isn’t already. Keep up the good work, dark
| MechenManachewagan chapter 29 . 11/4/2007
Good story, I just finished it today, A little confusing at times because you didn't mark when it changed POV's but still a good solid story.
| Elemeffayoh chapter 4 . 7/2/2007
dam this rocks