|Reviews for Titans begining|
| Silent Murderess chapter 6 . 6/13/2005
| coolgirlc chapter 5 . 6/13/2005
WHERE IS STARFIRE
| kmkoolj2010 chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
When are you going to come out with ch. 6? I can't wait to hear it!
| Mr. D 91 chapter 5 . 6/13/2005
So, the gang's almost complete. You're dooing great. Update soon.
| kmkoolj2010 chapter 5 . 6/12/2005
I love your story! I cannot wait to hear when Starfire comes in!
| lovex3spell chapter 5 . 6/12/2005
Okay, I've got two questions to ask before I get onto commentary.
1) Wait, so is this based on the comics or just partially based on the comics?
2) Could you separate the dialogue? It makes it easier to read... You know, like this:
A mysterious shadow appeared from the doorway.
"Who are you?" the boy stammered.
As the figure slowly approached him, it said, "The person you thought was long gone."
Hey, that wasn't that bad... ;] Haha! Okay, onto commentary!
I'm really liking the story. When I say that, I MEAN it. The chapters are neither long nor short-just a perfect length. I also like how you don't rush things. That's a challenge for me... -_-x I just get so eager to write what happens that I rush through, and I don't notice 'til I'm done.
Well, I'm looking forward to future chapters! Keep up the greatk work! XD (I've added this to my favorite stories list and story alert list! ;])
| Silent Murderess chapter 5 . 6/12/2005
yay! an update! cna I have another one?
| account-deactivated42333 chapter 5 . 6/12/2005
Update pleaze! i want to KNOW what's going to happen next!
| ellwing chapter 5 . 6/12/2005
lamo! i love the last quote...very nice touch...lol...k well do u know how long this is going to end up being?..k well yeah..bye
| Silent Murderess chapter 4 . 6/11/2005
you must update! i command you!
| account-deactivated42333 chapter 4 . 6/11/2005
this was great! Update soon!
| Zoe Saugin chapter 4 . 6/11/2005
I LIKE IT! IT IS VERY INTERESTING! Be sure to update soon, k?
| Jexiny chapter 4 . 6/11/2005
WHERE'S STARFIRE? I WANT STARFIRE. Your story is good ( i love it! ) But it would be better if Star was in it SOON! UPDATE NOW!
| Silent Murderess chapter 3 . 6/10/2005
i love you! or atleast i will if you update! tee-hee.
| Silent Murderess chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
YES! I LOVE ORIGIN FICS!