Reviews for A New Threat to the New World
The-3-Sueslayers chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Sounds good so far! ok, an OC if you still want one:

Name: Ria

Age: 23

Gender: girl

Description: shape shifter. She makes a point of nobody knowing what she actually looks like.

Abilities: Shape shifter. Also a good liar. What she's not good at it taking orders or being honest.

Well, there you go.
Vezerini Corozan chapter 47 . 8/22/2006
hmm... I still guessing you have a good reason for not having Vezerini show up... if not.. e-mail me if you need help on the personality... oh well. UPDATION! yes.. i have been waiting for a long time and kept on getting irritated when the updates on the stories you had done were not the one I was waiting for. God, I'm a literal fan boy now... LOL. Well, updation and try your hardest to get this thing going.. oh.. and I have recently posted up on my story as well... yeah I know.. I'm not posting up much... summer and everything was much more eventful than I thought it would be... well TTYL,

-Vezerini Corozan
Angelglory chapter 46 . 8/19/2006
AG: Wow, not a single review? Huh..

Well anyway, it was an allright chapter. The flashback wasn't really nessacary and took up chapter space. But you're the author not me.

Anyway, please post the next chapter! I wanna see what happens!

Locke: I hope Raine will be alright.

AG: *smug grin*

Locke: Quiet you...

-Angelglory, porud author of...hmm, well let's go with Lost Soul Complex for now. *nods*
treekicker chapter 45 . 6/18/2006
Suzu: Yay! :D

Jet: Wait a minute, those statue brothers are familar...

Suzu: Uh huh, from Devil May Cry 3.

Jet: Yeah. They deserved to die. "What is sigh"?

Suzu: Need I remind you, you are completely stuck in that game.

Jet: Hey I'm almost done! I just got stuck on a boss that's all!

Suzu: (snickers) Updation, please.
Angelglory chapter 45 . 6/15/2006
AG: Hey, you been playing Devil May Cry 3...

Locke: (The story is almost over...and I am nowhere to be found.)

AG: Not like youre a main character. Besides, youre out telling people about impending doom.

Locke: (Thats...)

AG: Okay, anyway, nice chapter. Keep it up!

-Angelglory, proud author of various stories
Vezerini Corozan chapter 45 . 6/10/2006
well, this was intersting.. two chapters in a row my charcter is "healing" last time I checked.. that wouldn't have beena problem but hey.. I hope I get a spotlight at somepoint. I wonder if would aloow avatars soon... propbably not... oh wlel, please update soon and have fun with thgis now that summer is here! and I've occasionally been updating mine... I'm wondering what happened to the lack of reviews.. oh well...
Zeldaman123 chapter 44 . 6/5/2006
is that the last chapter?
Dualzero chapter 44 . 4/20/2006
nice chapter, once again, i congratulate you, i just have been olazy and stuff XP well, keep writing and i'll keep reviewing _
Vezerini Corozan chapter 43 . 4/16/2006
I'm sorry that I haven't been able to review... I hate school! It sucks! oh well... So... MY character is still alive.. that's good... I don't want to hunt you down. But if they are going to fight again... I'm willing to help you out with it, or at least on Vezerini's side. I don't know... Maybe have e-mails with the section going back and forth fom each other. You pick. And If you do have Vezerini die... Talk to me about that and I'll tell you how he would "Disappear". Other than that... Updation!
angelic swordsman chapter 43 . 4/12/2006
Amazing story with very interesting orginal charactar. I can't wait to see what you write next. Please hurry and update soon.
Dualzero chapter 43 . 4/3/2006
well that chapter was great, and kai's knocked out...i think he' dreaming about orange soda lol, well you updated quick my friend, now keep writing, i got too much free time XP
treekicker chapter 43 . 3/22/2006
Suzu: We represent the lolly pop-

Jet: SHUT UP!

Suzu: Meep...excellent chapter Vyser-kun! _ Tech's dead! Yay!

Jet: I wish I was about to kill him...

Suzu: Niisan you wouldn't be able to anyway.

Jet: (glares)

Suzu: (sweatdrops) Updation again please!
Garfieldfan chapter 25 . 3/2/2006
(poke) Let's hear it for speed reading! (Prod) I guess you have been busy. Unlike me. Stupid writers block...
Kixtink chapter 42 . 2/23/2006
Cat: Wow...I haven't reviewed in a long time...

Sera: Yay! (Holds up pompoms) Go Zeek!

Cat: (Sweatdrop) Damnit...have you been in my sugar sock pile again?

Sera: (Pushes the sugar bowl under the bed)Uh...I don't have any idea what you talking about.

Lloyd: (Raises Eyebrow)You reilize she saw that Sera?

Sera: Ah...Lloydie, you hurt me. How could you do this to your own sister? (Teary Eyed) I thought you loved me!

Lloyd: (Rolls Eyes) Cut the waterworks.

Cat: (Salutes) I'll be awaiting your next chaper Vyser!

Sera(Waves while getting chased by Lloyd) don't keep us waiting!
AngelicTrinity chapter 42 . 2/20/2006
Great! I can't wait till the next story comes out! I love your stories! WHE!
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