Reviews for DoomVoom 3000
cl chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
You wrote such a beautiful episode. Good job, seriously!
Backroads chapter 1 . 3/5/2005
Oh my goodness... That made me laugh so hard! But it was also freakin' cute! Vacuums. Oh boy.
OnOn chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
lol! Funny! :)
Timbo chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Good Story
LilacShadow chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
This was really funny! Me likes! Keep up the good work!
Widow Shark chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Hey, Great story! I could totally see the Disney Channel making an episode of this. The characters were right on. "Seriously!" (lol).

I do have one little comment though; it may have been easier to read if the story were separated between scenes with some kind of visible divider. I'm only saying this because the scenes kind of bled together. I got confused when one person was talking and then all of a sudden it was a different scene and someone else was talking. But other than that, terrific story!

Keep writing and keep smiling : ).


Widow Shark
Alice Shade chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
LOL... Is it a funny day today, or what?
Netherwood chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Oh man, this was hilarious! The twist at the end was great, a birthday for Mama Lipsky. And thank you for all the zombie references! I loved Ron's and KP's little verbal sparring. And Shego's commentary on the idiocy of guys. Keep up the marvelous work!