Reviews for Empyrean
billy chapter 7 . 4/15
fuck you give me part 8
ooooooooooooooo chapter 4 . 4/15
suck my dick ye pirate
FROST1441 chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
u know this is a great story and i added a new enemy to my list and his toshki from the beginning i hate him but cool story
calvin360 chapter 2 . 4/1/2012
it was alright
pokemon lover chapter 7 . 4/13/2011
MORE MORE MORE MORE THIS IS AWESOME MORE plz!
wickeddude42 chapter 7 . 11/15/2010
awsome story dude!keep up the good work!
Jake5791 chapter 7 . 6/9/2010
more more make more chapter ash and may all the way
Jake5791 chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
awesome dude awesome
GlameowGirl chapter 4 . 3/28/2010
I love this story! It is SO cute, how Ash and Toshki are jealous of each other!
Ajhus chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
What the hell... The first chapt was weird... but im gonna keep readn' it to see what you are doing with this...
Guest chapter 4 . 4/20/2009
there is a part in the 4th chapter where you misspelled may with mat...pls correct this
walter chapter 7 . 1/15/2009
Yuck! Your whole story sucked! Please try writing from a more logical and realistic view if you plan on writing more stories in the future. And please give your future stories way better endings as well.
Ina chapter 7 . 10/9/2008
umm a little correction about may... her bulbasaur is already a venusaur and her delcatty is still a skitty and her munchlax too. But i really like your story! go advanceshipping! u rock!
vampiress-1313 chapter 7 . 6/21/2008
that was good please write chapter 8 :}
readeradv chapter 7 . 6/6/2008
Cute...

Good story, good storyline...

This is just begging for a sequel...
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