|Reviews for Frog Mask|
| handsomeP chapter 3 . 1/4
uh your grammar is off putting and so is all the yelling. Um your explanations could do with a bit more work, you know flesh them out. I had to stop half way through chapter 3.
| TharzZzDunN chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Please consult a beta reader or a spell checking program. You need a lot of practice on sentence structure and separating thoughts from actions.
| ChronoMitsurugi chapter 3 . 11/27/2012
Death to Hinata, Sakura and Jiriaya.
P.S. pretty interesting fic so far.
| Lazyman12 chapter 14 . 9/13/2012
This is getting good!
| meggoneggo chapter 14 . 6/9/2011
you really should continue this story! its really good and you have over 500 people following it! :]
| Simsaru chapter 14 . 8/15/2010
Ok, this was an amazing story! However, id like to ask why it hasnt been updated in soooooo loonngg! Id love to know what happens! Love how its been but whant MORE!
| na chapter 14 . 8/13/2010
love the story but you realy need to update! Its to good to stop now! :(
| FangOfDrknss chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
When are you gonna update this story?
| Maki chapter 2 . 7/10/2010
4th name is namikaze minato
| The Dark Side Has Yaoi chapter 14 . 3/2/2010
Great story! Update!
| Sora Nadeshiko chapter 3 . 2/15/2010
Er...Isn't the Yondaime's name supposed to be Namikaze(last name) Minato (first name)...
| beth chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
found this story in someone's favorites, and it had promise. I don't expect you to finish it, but the truth is, I won't either. The spelling mistakes are too frequent to bother with.
| god of all chapter 14 . 7/3/2009
Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.
| Kurushimi-31415 chapter 13 . 6/30/2009
You know, I really think there is about two months since last update (what in the world could be the reason for that?).
| Kurushimi-31415 chapter 4 . 6/28/2009
Just noticed something... How did he find a mirror in the 2nd chuunin exams?