Reviews for The Prince's First Love
Guest chapter 30 . 1/8/2017
There's too much going on. Most of your Japanese spelling is wrong. Your paragraph spacing needs help.
Miralith chapter 30 . 9/18/2009
Love the story it was awesome! I hope that you do make a sequel!
Serenity Dinago chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Mrs. Sesshomaru chapter 30 . 7/25/2006
luv it. luv it. luv it! sequel?
lizzy chapter 12 . 12/27/2005
well um again, Kagome seems really bitchy, because, Inuyasha didn't do anything! Kagome was the one who didn't love him anymore first, so i think she hurt him more than he hurt her, all he did was kill her, not torture her by letting her know that he doesn't love her, so yeah, i think Kagome's being overdramatic, and isn't Kagome supposed to be forgiving? but again, that's the only part i don't like, otherwise your story is good.
lizzy chapter 9 . 12/27/2005
umm, no offense, but in like,, chappie 8, you kida portray Kagome as a bitch. like she only told Inuyasha that she loved him to save her own life. i like your story and all, but yeah, that's like, the only part i don't really like.
deviltrickster chapter 21 . 12/4/2005
Some spelling 's still good, but... ehem... WHY IS SHIPPO IN THE HOT SPRING WITH RIN? Gah! that's just... WRONG!

Yay Inuyasha died. I'm not a hater but he kinda deserved it after he killed her and tried to kill her again.

keep writing
deviltrickster chapter 11 . 12/2/2005
WOW! thats dry!"retarded nicknames" ? that's sad
deviltrickster chapter 9 . 12/2/2005
deviltrickster chapter 8 . 12/2/2005
Whar is the meaning of onegai and Gomen-nasai? you're Japanese, no?
deviltrickster chapter 6 . 12/2/2005

Yeah that would be funny ifhe went into the bathroom and she let out a BIG, STINKY fart. Imagine what his face wouuld look like. HA HA.

Dude that's funny .
deviltrickster chapter 5 . 12/2/2005
It's a bit OOC but its still good. Keep writing.
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