|Reviews for In The End|
| saraha ann chapter 2 . 4/8/2005
this one was sad because he was beating her and then raped her it was pretty good.
| sarahann chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
it was very interesting this chapter.
| davideonarine chapter 15 . 4/4/2005
it was kinda a weak ending but i think i was really mad that it was over! i loved this story!
Luvs it so much
| davideonarine chapter 13 . 4/4/2005
im crieing so much my head is hurting
i love this story
| davideonarine chapter 10 . 4/4/2005
they love each other soo much thows bastards!
| davideonarine chapter 9 . 4/4/2005
my brithday is jan 12 to!:-)
| davideonarine chapter 4 . 4/4/2005
your a fabulous writer!
| davideonarine chapter 3 . 4/4/2005
omg i love this chapter i balled my eyes out that s.o.b clay i hate him and i just dont hope elliot and olivia have a bubble bath togethere
| Kim chapter 2 . 3/28/2005
Seriously, I know you are supposed to fantisize stories, but whoever wrote this story should be fired. Olivia is smarter then to keep her abuser to herself. i.e she works with things like that.
Olivia doesn't date OR invite her boyfriends like that over her house.
You HAVE to get the charactor straight!
| momo0424 chapter 15 . 3/28/2005
Good chapter! I can't wait for the next one.
| Poeticpunk777 chapter 15 . 3/28/2005
AW! SO CUTE!
| Bedazzle Me chapter 15 . 3/28/2005
Oh! How sweet! I love the name hehehe...Benson Benson lolz! Ok...shutting up now...LOL!
| justawritier chapter 15 . 3/27/2005
| BrittanyLS chapter 15 . 3/27/2005
I'm thrilled you got Liv and Elliot back together! I'd love to see more, maybe even their wedding!
| Survivor88 chapter 15 . 3/27/2005