|Reviews for In The End|
| LawNorderLuver01 chapter 15 . 3/27/2005
I LOVE IT! but if you are not going to update in a long time, do ya mind putting a review of what happened PLEASE!
| shelly123 chapter 15 . 3/26/2005
good one think about part 2
| fanficluva72 chapter 12 . 3/9/2005
oh my gosh, please please please continue it and update really soon! this is a great story! at first, i wanted to like, cry, because i couldnt see Olivia being a mom or leaving SVU and NYC, but its turning out to be a really good story...so please continue!
| momo0424 chapter 11 . 3/7/2005
I love this story. The last few chapters were great. I can't wait to read the ones to come.
| love2readfanfic chapter 11 . 3/6/2005
I really hope this is not the end of this story..This is a great story and I hope there is more to come...
| ANGELIA chapter 12 . 3/5/2005
HEY I WOULD LOVE TO PROOFREAD FOR YOU. JUST SEND ME AN EMAIL. HOPE TO HEAR FROM YOU SOON.
| LawNorderLuver01 chapter 12 . 3/5/2005
LOVE IT! its soo sweet!
| Windwaker chapter 12 . 3/4/2005
you just can't do this to me. i have to know if they are going to get together or not. please hurry up and write more. i think your story is one of the best SVU stories that i have ever read. Please when you put up your next chater, please e-mail me at Wildwind05
i would really apericate it if you could. i need to know what is going to happen and if they will get together. will she see elliot at the precinct or not. will ella be happy to see him if they do or not. did they put clay in prison or what. why did you make olivia leave new york city. please e-mail me and let me know. also e-mail me when you put up the next chapter. thanks.
| Trinity005 chapter 11 . 3/4/2005
I read the whole 11 chapters at one time. Really, really interesting story. Olivia leaving town might seem a bit rushed, but I can understand it. I just don't think she needed to leave the Police, she could have been transferred, couldn't she? But this is not a big problem.
I also like how Olivia is not taking too long to tell Elliot about the baby, most other fics have her hiding the kid for years, and I don't think that's nice.
Well, I'm really interested in this story. I don't have the time to do beta-reading, but honestly I don't think you need it. Write freely, after all this is fanfiction.
Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to your next chapters.
| HarmMacLove chapter 11 . 3/4/2005
A cliff hanger? What is up with that? J/K i love this story. I hope you update soon. Liv makes a great mom, please get her and elliot together so they can be a family!
| Poeticpunk777 chapter 11 . 3/4/2005
woo hoo 5 chapters! Can't wait until the next one and Elliot finds out about the baby!
| justawritier chapter 11 . 3/4/2005
very good have liv/el back togther.
| jmewebber chapter 11 . 3/4/2005
I do like this story but I feel that it is rushed. I think if you would take the time to explain more of their emotions and I don't understand how Elliot broke Olivia's heart because she never gave him the chance she just ran away. I'm looking forward to reading more though.
| Angelia chapter 11 . 3/4/2005
OMG, this is an amazing story. You cannot leave me hanging like this. Please finish soon or at least post another chapter.
| archangewoman chapter 11 . 3/4/2005
wait hold up and back up HE BROKE HER HEART ? wait wait wait HE BROKE HER HEART ? the woman didnt even give him a chance she left him because of her own doubts and worries and ran away from her problems and HE BROKE HER HEART ? the guy prepares a romantic dinner tells her in the note attached to the flowers that he is her secret admirer they sleep together she leaved with out saying a word AND HE BROKE HER HEART ?
Now stay with me here cuz i like the fic a bit to sweet on some parts but its good now back to the topic at hand HE BROKE HER HEART ?
and wait wait wait wasnt casey the one who told elliot to go after oliva in the first place ? then the guy makes his move olivia freaks goes to casey tells her what happens and casey says nothing ?
Not to mention that mr cragen knows of elliots is feelings and yet didnt voice any kind of protest or told olivia any thing or for that matter speak to elliot about what has happend
then there is the whole blame game your putting on the poor guy and the fact he might act like a jerk in the next chapter or be all sweet and welcomes back olivia with open arms which brings to mind the next question
if casey and cragen saw how much elliot was affected by this sholdnt of they informed olivia to a certain extent that he was some what hurting they were best friends
then olivia acts like a victim and blames the poor guy for breaking her hear HE BROKE HER HEART ? what about him do we get to see how he spent his time while olivia lived her life ?no we only get one measly little bit of paragraph were he has trouble sleeping and thats it
lets forget the whole deep love he has for olivia and put him in a scene were he has trouble sleeping then there is the fact that cragen knows elliot loves olivia
i know i know its not there place to say any thing but its like you just blame the poor guy for every thing and dont give us an insight into his own feelings and time alone
i mean did he get a new partner ? how is he dealing with his job and family matters and for that matter how are his kids dealing with a depressed father not to mention the other members of svu
you know just shot the poor man and have him rest in peace that way it can be and agnst /happy ending why i say this easy
olivia has her family and her life elliot might have been her love but seeing as how HE BROKE HER HEART? the shock of his death wouldnt be to much to her
because come on give us something here an insigth to elliot to the others and to cragen and casey is pov i mean there the ones behind the scenes
and poor elliot like i said just pull the trigger and put him out of his misery or give us something to go by on his side of his life since olivia left
i still cant believe olivia said HE BROKE HER HEART jeez that woman has serious issues maybe she didt get over clay is attack and fears relationships that is why she ran away from elliot but that cant be because you said in previos chapters that she felt safe with elliot
see how this affects a reader is mind
i like the story hence why im reading it the stuff above its just things i noticed that bother me kind of like unresolved issues and lack of mass
not a flame just an opion