Reviews for Marguerite's Cave
iamAJ chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
good story,mate...
Johnny'shumiliatedgrape chapter 5 . 2/25/2005
oh good. I'm glad he respected her wishes and what not. She's still there!

I am surprised that Gibbs has said nothing about a girl being on the ship, but then again... he didn't say anything about ehr at all. I'm getting the feeling that she isn't there?

Lovely work. Update soon! (:
Johnny'shumiliatedgrape chapter 4 . 2/24/2005
I get the dreams Jack has been having. CLEVER!

Poor Swab...

Le sigh.
missybrowneyes chapter 4 . 2/24/2005
this was very good. i hope you continue, i am enjoying the turn the tail took.
Johnny'shumiliatedgrape chapter 3 . 2/22/2005
wow... i'm kinda confused. the girl in the chest is marguerite? and swab is the one trying toget him up?

but unbelieveable!

A-blackwinged-bird chapter 3 . 2/22/2005
Very cool story, love all the twists and turns. Your plots always draw me in, and the stories are so fast moving that I feel as if I'm watcing a movie.

Great job!
A-blackwinged-bird chapter 2 . 2/22/2005
Oh... this is getting good! *moving closer to light*
Johnny'shumiliatedgrape chapter 2 . 2/21/2005
o. creepiness.

poor jack. I wanna give him some rum.

this is more bizarre then ever, but, i lurve it.


hmm.. update!


A-blackwinged-bird chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Promising start! The attention and work you've put into this is clear. I love the intro, and Jack's character is as charming as ever. ;)

You've got talent, I'm interested to see where this story leads.
ChelseasDeadSmile chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Okay I think
Johnny'shumiliatedgrape chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Oh man. What a thing to say to Jack. Barbossa? Greatest pirate? I highly doubt it. No no doubt.

This is great! You should realy update soon. Please. If ya have the time and all.