Reviews for Hitori Ja Nai : Not Alone
Aiko-chan18 chapter 1 . 8/23/2016
Amazing story ! 3
vaporeonxglaceon chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
that was so sweet
The Fault in Our Anime chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
Love. This. Amazing.
fangirlsonfire chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
Awesome fanfiction.
zek-xz chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
That was a very nice story.
Ohfortheloveofpete chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
This idea of a fanfic actually came into my head...
hopelessromantic chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
this is just proof that LuNa is the best ship in one piece. nice story!
TheRealMaddHatter chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Aw, that's so cute! I love it!
TheOldNinja chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
C-CHAN chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Wow...I found this fanfic by accident, but I'm glad I did!
coolreader5 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Write more please!
Butterfree chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Aww, that was really such a sweet story

That whole scenario of Nami and Luffy being stuck on an island together was perfectly played out. Usually, authors have huge problems working out that kind of plot without makng it seem too forced to random.

Though, there were maybe one or two holes in it that wasn't really explained(but could've if you did). Such as why Luffy didn't just use his rubber power to grab back onto the ship when they were flung off at first(if he still had the energy to grab onto Nami). Also, I'd picture the two more to be the type to go build a ship out of wood and try to find the others as their first instinct, espeically since Nami was the navigator.

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Lord of Murder chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
Aw! So cute! I loved it!
snowman794 chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
aww cute
popyo chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Such a cute, lovely story! Really like it, especially the ending, it was so nice and sweet.
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