|Reviews for Overcome|
| delaney chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
aka teen titan obsesser very passionate and realistic amazing
| ScarredSkull chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Intoxicating. That's what this story was. It was a drug, addicting. I love it.
| HeadinCloud chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
This perfectly represents the way I view the concept of a R/R relationship, and why I am drawn to the idea. It incorporated all of the best aspects of their dynamic, and avoids all the cliches (such as Starfire bashing). Another reason I personally like the couple is because I am too much like Raven for my own good, and I think you demonstrate a good understanding of what it feels like to be someone with the disposition of painful shyness, especially in relation to issues of intimacy. I haven't read a story this good in a while, and it was just a pleasure, like a Shakespearean romance in Titan's uniform, haha. And you really turned me on to the second person perspective. I think it allowed for a lot of insight into the motivations and feelings behind the actions of the characters, which is always compelling to analyze, and you did it all very well.
I'd say more, but I think I'm in ramble mode, so I'll cut myself off, and just say that you did a great job, and demonstrate a depthful understanding of the characters, and approached their coming together in a way that was believable, which is a difficult thing to achieve. Thanks for sharing it with the internet :)
| raerobgal chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Wow, that was so deep, and SOOO romantic! I loved it! All of it! It was really in character, so congrats! And the brother/sister love between BB and Raven is how I see them, and you portrayed them in that way really, really well. Best fanfic I've read in a while, and the second person thing was great.
| silverduo chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
This was beautiful. Nice write. :D
| Danyu chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
An excellent read. Deeply emotional and very Rob/Rae.
| sasina chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
this type of fics are what I like. they are deep, so emotional, painful feelings that turn to fear and then the paradise. lost souls claiming for love but they can't reach it until the lights goes down.
I love it. so expressive, it was beautiful. and beautiful is not enough.
| Pontificator chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
I'm glad to find a second-person story that doesn't seem like I'm reading a "Choose Your Own Adventure" novel. Instead, it sounds like a wise conscience, who knows the truth and core of Raven.
| serenity77 chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
A cute and short fic. Loved it! Great job!
| mixedfic chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Great story! keep writing!
I was also thinking of writing a teen titans story that has a couple of RaeRob but the thing is that i don't know how they can come together u know...can u give me like a little hint to how to bring them closer?
ANYWAY GREAT WONDERFUL STORY!
| ravenslair chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Finally had a chance to read this, and I loved it. This is a wonderful story for anyone who ever had feelings for someone, but were to afraid to say. That's probably about everyone. Thanks...Gerry
| ChocolateCurlz chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Oh my Titan God...
That was amazing! I ADORED IT! Everything, the second person narrative, BB being so observant & playing the role that in a lotta Rae/Rob stories that Cy takes, Star and Rob's undramatic split, the battle, Raven awakening to have Robbie-Poo there... I LOVED IT!
Honestly, it was a wonderful read and surperbly done. Keep it coming, :P
| DreamingFae chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
I loved the way you described the laughter scene. Lovely *sniff* Simply lovely.
| Xyane chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
Great fic! I liked the way your story just seemed to flow. You did a really good job keeping them in character too. Keep writing!
| Saramis Kismet chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
I like the perspective you used here, it's very different. And wow, "What am i supposedly scared of?" "Me." Heh, that hit home... You wrote this really well, it was all believable. BB/R frienship included I hardly ever see that in R/R fics. Nice work.