|Reviews for Hard to keep|
| Nr.Six chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Haahaa really funny! Great story!
| Asugar chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
Great job. Chemistry here is sizzling.
| kaitebug chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
cool rhyming rocks
| ICY chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
MY THIS IS REALLY GOOD STUFF, MY HO MY JOHN/TEYLA YUMMY
| Denise Port chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
| Alexzander Stark chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
VERY VERY nice Please write MORE
| azenthar chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
Naughty John. I'm pretty sure there are many people (other than Teyla) who would beat you with a stick. Not in that way, of course.
haha. Loved the little story. Especially the bit at the end. :D
| fmapreshwab chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
The tonfa scenes are always fun to watch. I like how you presented Teyla, very impressive.
| The Puppeteer chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
Hey...I just wanted to send some feedback on how much I enjoyed this very cute and fun fic. I liked the interaction as always, and the visual on the fight scene was excellent. I was hoping to get a second part to the ficlet, but I like this as well...and this is my favorite line Shep: 'I had you, you're just hard to keep.'
| Yarrharr chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
ya know, every time a man and a woman start to hit each other with sticks...it's love. ;)
| Gater101 chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
So heavy on the innuendo! Lol, but good none the less. A little cheese is good for everyone :)
Loved the line about Having her, but she was hard to keep.
| RogueCajun chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
"I believe it is called...playing hard to get."
That's right Teyla play hard to get, keep Sheppard on his toes.
I loved this, it was so great.
| CharmedAli chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
this is really good, i enjoyed it
| DD chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
That was great! Love the banter and the verbal foreplay. Love the way she turned the tables on him. Good job and good writing. Sheyla rocks. More please!
| igotnothin chapter 1 . 6/20/2005