|Reviews for Of Jetpacks and Swords|
| Meneil chapter 8 . 9/29/2007
I was playing Rocket Knight recently when I remembered this fic. Cool, two more chapters! I can't wait to see how this all works out... especially with Axle. Great two new chapters, keep it up.
| Twilight-Prince1002 chapter 8 . 9/6/2007
This is very nice! I always liked the game, and you are doing a fine job re-telling it! Please make some more chapters! I gotta see how this ends!
| Az The Dragon chapter 8 . 4/11/2006
We! It has been updated!
Short, but good. I do hope to see next update soon
| Meneil chapter 6 . 8/14/2005
Very suspensful and interesting. I like it a lot. It's really interesting to see Axle and Sparkster talk to each other, and how they interact with the characters around them.
The last chapter was more smooshed together than your other ones, though... Might want to fix the structure.
Hope you update soon. Keep up the good work!
| Az The Dragon chapter 6 . 7/12/2005
Lil Hint: You should divide the narrative part from the talk; this way it is more easy for people to read.
And I noticed that in the last part of the chapter you passed from first person to third...
| Az The Dragon chapter 5 . 7/9/2005
This is a good fic. It's a good thing you changed something about the story and perfectly blended them into it.
Just one curiosity, where is Mifune Sanjulo?