Reviews for Slave
akroaggie chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Well, I'm a little late to the party, but what a great piece! I love his comparison of her to a Fae. I hope he knows what he's getting into!
flamethrowerqueen chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
This was great! The writing seemed a little stunted, but it's mostly just because of the context of how it's written. I adored the whole idea of Jareth testing her in the Labyrinth in order to bring out her inner light so she wouldn't be smothered by his darkness; it was a delicious idea, and it fit rather perfectly.
Lone.Mo0n chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
oh wow that was like short virsion de ja voo
Dark Gotham chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
Rather nice.
shatterdheart chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
I like your story you use a lot of detail. please keep writing.
Kiea chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Well I wished that this was longer

but could you write another chapter


and Happy Birthday to you! May God blees you.