Reviews for Blond Demons
Emilylovesdraco chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
Love ittttt!
remuslives21 chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
This is really good! Yay for malfoy-Potter sexyness!
SylvanDreamer chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
Wow. Pretty good. I like it. I'm not used to JamesLucius slash but you actually make it work. Great job!
Forsaken Elf chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Oh, delicious!

There were parts I liked and parts I didn't like, but the whole thing could have been written better. I'm not saying your story sucked or anything (it was quite good) but there were some grammatical errors and your sentences were so choppy that it was almost painful to read.

Compound sentences, my friend, compound sentences.
Rosen Order XIII chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
It was a very amusing story.
Bonnie Mizuhara chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
Yay, I love LuciusJames stories! That was a good read.
jabberwocky-x chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
Oh, it's so sweet! _
roguelegacy chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Ooh, I like it! _ Keep up the great work...Update soon? Pwease?

The Worst Author In History chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Writing style is good and grammer is acceptable. The only fault I can find with the story is that Voldemort is attacking while James is still in school. At this point in the Harry Potter time line, Voldemort was still Tom Marvelo Riddle. Also, they're acting rather OOC. Anyway, aside from that it's not too bad. Maybe you could ammend those errors and post again, or just leave it.