|Reviews for Pretending To Be Normal|
| bardsgrl4evr chapter 5 . 9/7/2005
*claps excitedly* oh goodness, i'm loving it so much. Xander and Jarod BOTH totally deserved some lack in the "family" area. Aw, they're like totally great for each other. *shrieks happily* like I said, I'm loving it. Please keep up the great work. I'll be eagerly waiting.
| Toniboo chapter 5 . 9/6/2005
hey! u finally updated! Yea! i love this fic so much and i loved this chap loads! this whole fic is awesome! i cant w8 4 ur nxt installment! Update soon please!
| bardsgrl4evr chapter 3 . 7/26/2005
Whoa. Now there's a twist rarely seen. I'm terribly curious as to who Xander's "mother" is. Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
| Toniboo chapter 3 . 7/19/2005
omigod i love this fic so far please please please update soon!"!
| dogbertcarroll chapter 3 . 5/25/2005
| Chara13 chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
| Kyuub-Vixen chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
i love this! GO PRETENDERS! keep up the great work. hope to see the next chapter soon. wonder what would happen when Jarod relies that xander is his son? really wonder...
| Allyanna chapter 3 . 5/7/2005
I loved it! I really did! Even if I know nothing about pretender...
I hope to see the enxt chapter soon!
| Lady Crucio chapter 3 . 5/4/2005
I love this story. Please get the next update out as soon as you can! Is Miss Parker Xander's mother? (We cottoned onto Jarod as the father I think, though that's for confirming it) I really want to know what'll happen now.
| rmthiowb chapter 3 . 4/29/2005
O_o how do ya like THAT for a chapter ending..!
| King Henry the V chapter 3 . 4/29/2005
I like the way the story's been organized and put together. Present tense is always a little weird to read in a story, but the author pulls it off well enough.
One thing: Clichés cut through desire to read more like a hot knife through butter. Don't use 'em.
| King Henry the V chapter 2 . 4/29/2005
Paragraphs are entirely long. Many can be divided into at least 3 separate paragraphs. Each paragraph should be about 1 thing; once that changes, new paragraph. It's very important for readability.
| Imzadi chapter 3 . 4/29/2005
Wow! This is quite a story. I love it. Xander has a logical, reasonable explanation for everything. The last sentence really came from out of left field, but I should have been expecting it. Actually, though, I thought Jarod was Xander's brother, not his father. I really like this, and it was worth the wait for the new chapter.
| L Moonshade chapter 3 . 4/28/2005
Yay! An update! I'm really enjoying this story, so far. I like the way you're portraying the characters, and can't wait for Xander and Jarod to meet. Please update soon!
| dogbertcarroll chapter 2 . 3/13/2005
Good chapter. I assume Jarrod is his brother?