Reviews for Lily and the Arrogant Marauder
theshysmartgirl chapter 8 . 4/25/2014
This was a good effort, I think. (No offense, but...) I think it lacked detail and was too cliche. I think there could have been more elaboration and extension of the plot. I liked your basic idea, of Lily having a dark past that haunts her, but I think you made Lily too perfect. Like she was tallish, with long hair, perfect eyes, perfect skin, many talents etc. But all in all, a good story
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
wow i really liked this.. lily summers. my name is lily summers too..
Guest chapter 5 . 3/15/2013
Bad dog! BAD!
Guest chapter 4 . 3/15/2013
I play flute, so I can tell you the lowerest not is low C!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/15/2013
Guest chapter 2 . 3/15/2013
Akward... but funny.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Ahh, bet she got a headache, playing flute that long, fast and rapid.
AngelfromBeyondBelow chapter 8 . 1/8/2013
awww cute
Guest chapter 3 . 8/10/2012
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Hey! My daddy's 6'4" and he's not THAT tall. Granted, I'm 5'6", so I guess that my point is moot... Well, this just got awkward... I'm going to go read more of this now.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I saw the summary and got a total Grinch grin. You know, the •v•
JustYourAverageWitch chapter 8 . 8/28/2010
This was really good. It was a great ending.
anaa-pixie chapter 8 . 8/16/2010
ha cute!
StandUpEvenIfYouStandAlone chapter 8 . 1/11/2010
Marauderette96 chapter 8 . 1/11/2010
i really liked thi story and it wasn't to long, awesome!
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