|Reviews for No More Dead Heroes|
| Catacroker chapter 18 . 6/12
Great story! I know it's been years since you wrote this and probably won't even read this comment, but I would like to let you know I enjoyed the fic a lot, even if it is unfinished. I liked the dark and not-so-happy approach, the uncertainty about what could possibly be the ending (didn't look like a happy end was coming, but at least I hope you had in mind some good things for these poor unlucky people). Also, dealing with so many characters and points of view at the same time must have been challenging, and I think you did very well.
I think you have talent and I hope that you are still writing or seriously considering to do it again, even if it has nothing to do with fanfiction or this old fandoms. Thanks for this fic!
| Demon King Piccolo chapter 18 . 4/18/2013
Great story - I was completely captivated from the first chapter and I read the entire thing with the course of a single day. You made good character development, especially in Tsunade, and the story was, I felt, much more enjoyable for its bleakness.
Thank for the enjoyable read!
| Animeaddict666 chapter 12 . 10/10/2007
The ending to "Arduous" was spine tingling! To be clique! But it was! I love your portrayal of war, of psychosis, of relational turbulence. Bringing Rain into the picture just makes it awfully hopeless! I hate to sound corny, but I hope that something less emotionally exhausting surfaces soon. I hate fluffy, plot-less crap, and I love your writing style, but I feel almost depressed that NOTHING is working out for them. Poor guys! And I don't think Hinata was actually OOC, but more matured with a believable personality development. Keep up the great work. I'm addicted.
| cars chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
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| Meemei chapter 18 . 12/27/2005
wow, you should do like side stories for all the relation ships and how they got together. that would be hot.
| Meemei chapter 9 . 12/27/2005
I just have one thing to say; Gaara...dead. How could you. You know, this story reminds me of the chorus of Like Toy Soldiers, By, Eminem. HAve you heard it before. I was listenng to that song and reading this story together and I was almost crying. Well actually, I was. Is there any hope?
| Bunch-o-Nuts chapter 18 . 12/26/2005
Bad cliffhanger! I want to know what happened to Neji and Shikamaru and what's this about Sabaku no Gaara? Please write again soon!
| alliyah chapter 18 . 12/25/2005
Oh, where to begin?
You've correctly painted the portrait of a dysfunctional society-one that is on the verge of falling (utterly, completely) into darkness.
The hopelessness of this plotline is what captivates me the most. Everyone is dying. Everyone is slowly but surely turning insane.
It is, perhaps, the realization that I -don't- understand that makes each chapter ever the more tantalizing to read. For instance, chapter 18-Where has Shikamaru gone? Gaara is alive? What is Kakashi, now? What does Hinata know? Question after question after question...
The sentimental part of me still hopes for a happy ending, no matter how horrific the current events. Keep writing; I will now be a dedicated reviewer.
| KoveAiden chapter 18 . 12/24/2005
Hi! I've been reading this story for quite a while and I just wanna say that I love it! I give you speed in writing the next chapter and I inquire if there is a possibility for a *gasp* happy ending?
| Neptune410 chapter 18 . 12/15/2005
my gosh, i haven't read this fic in forever. so long in fact, that i had to go and reread it again. yay. it was awesome! i had almost forgotten how good this ficcy was and how much i love(ed) it. OMG. i am pretty much speechless right now.
I love your writing style. it has no akward bumps or pauses, no misspellings, and no other yucky type stuff. haha.
and now, i am dying for an update. like, dying reallyreallyreally bad. haha.
i love all the foreshadowing too. and even the cliffhangers, even though they kill me.
So, update soon! (and make me a very happy person!)
| Zenna chapter 18 . 12/10/2005
dear god... i think i love you. no... i'm sure i do. brilliant story. i always have loved the gruesome angsty war stories, but this is truely one of the best i've ever seen.i absolutely love your use of characters in this, and how well you've kept them true to their personalities! and i adore kakashi and genma here. admittedly, they were two of my favorite characters already, but it just makes you love them all the more when they're in such a cool story. thank you so much for writing this! please keep it up.
| XXXX chapter 18 . 12/10/2005
This is such a great fic! It's full of twists!
But I have a question...
Isn't the yondaime supposed to be on the other side?
| Bunch-o-Nuts chapter 17 . 10/30/2005
You are an incredible author and I'm so sorry I haven't been able to read this sooner to find out where it was going. I hope you update soon though, because I really want to know what happens to all the different story lines you have going.
| therealesther chapter 17 . 6/15/2005
wow...everyone's going CUCKOO!
they're all off their rockers...and what's the deal with the sakukaka mind link? O_o interesting...hehe
great naruto and sasuke scene.
i'm a little worried about hinata...what on earthe does she know and how will she use it? awesome use of the gentle fist btw...!
great writing, keep it up.
| ndruo chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
you know, you'd get a crapload more review is this weren't yaoi. Your writing style is crisp, your dialogue is smooth, you provide just the right amount of detail. You avoid the pitfalls that a lot of fanfic writers fall into such as choppy or run-on dialogue and over/underdescription... but the yaoi/shonen ai turns a lot of people off to the story. Excellent writing, though the subject matter may be a bit off of the mainstream tastes.