|Reviews for my boy|
| Eclipse Eternity chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
Can I borrow this? i have a friend i need to show this to. But deppressins made him hard to talk to and all he's been responding to is my drawing.
| Aiiro-bara chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
I normally don't read poems, but this is really good. But, you spelt styrofoam as styrophone. A few other formating errors, but the poem was quite well done. _u I hope you don't really mind the critique.
| Ashes Ashley chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
Twas good! You know I'm reading these JtHM fanfics and I'm realizing that there aren't many GOOD ones...but I like this _
Spelling is really the only thing I can say is wrong with this...but that's easily fixed
| Bagatelle chapter 1 . 2/23/2005
First reviewer EVER!
I remember reading this on your deviantART account...it's still good, don't worry ;
One wee problem, though...there were quite a few spelling mistakes.