Reviews for Cost of a Life Debt
Anna chapter 10 . 7/16
Wish there was more!
daisycb chapter 10 . 6/28
Have you completed this elsewhere?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8
He made a vow to protect Lily's does his protecting get him a life dept?

That's like getting a prize for doing your job when you literally did nothing special. I hate that it's like a pet on the head for doing what you actually are paid to's retarded...

Did he not make the vow in this story? How else would it be logical...

Seriously plot hole...
Guest chapter 2 . 5/8
First of all this every one shit on Harry Potter because it's the only way fiction about him world is getting old. You mean he was a a slave to the wizarding world and now the man who tormented him and helped kill his mother is the one to save him from himself or some shit?

Second I have read a lot of slash stories and there are poorly done and amazingly written ones.

Personally I'm sick of these Harry needs to be tortured to be shown the errors of his thinking or saved shit. Id rather this story just be snapped revenge. Not reading it...

I'm also glad it's not slash as a slave Harry one would be creepy.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2015
Bastards, the Lot of them!
Russ chapter 10 . 10/20/2015
Another disappointment, story not finished after ten years, why start if you don't finish.
marthapreston4 chapter 8 . 3/15/2015
The only I thought While reading this was "huh" it was a little to much info and not enough at the same time
marthapreston4 chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
If this was a thing couldnt harry call in the debts of the entire wizardign world they all owe him
penname915 chapter 10 . 12/6/2014
Poor Harry, those are perhaps the three people he would least have wanted to share about his childhood! Not only that, but they definately have motive for his 'revenge' on the Dursley's. Why of why didn't Snape ask him if he killed the Dursleys. Then, at least he would have said no under the serum? Well, Snape is playing things well. But, honestly, Draco- having so much political power? Fudge still being Minister... Well, if Harry never bothers with the Wizarding world again- it will be justified. Aside from his friends and a few others, they really have only meant him harm or believed anything the ministry and news papers say. I am ranting because the injustice of these last chapters, they are hard to read I guess. I said it before, Harry certainly is a survivor.
penname915 chapter 9 . 12/6/2014
It's horrible- that Harry has his free choice taken from him. Even if Snape can't ask anything immoral, its horrible that Harry has to sit, speak, etc. on command. Harry certainly is a survivor, some would have considered suicide preferable. Thankfully Snape hasn't purposefully made things harder for him. I have trouble imagining a friendship forming between Harry and Snape, with them never spending time together. It sounds lonely- for Harry. Of course, he seems to be approaching this as an extended stay at the Dursley's. So isolation it is. I just hope it doesn't last too long. I wish Harry coul be happy. Thanks goodness for Hermione and Ron, explaining things. How could Dumbledore not explain things better? They barely gave Harry any details! And the Ministry! Accusing Harry without proof... Well, I suppose I can see that happening. Hmm. So Snape is responsible for Harry's well-being now. This could be bad. I imagine he wouldn't be to skilled at anticipating his needs. I guess we shall see in your next chapters.
penname915 chapter 4 . 12/6/2014
Oh boy, what is Harry thinking? Poor Dobby, considered the shame of his family! It was very... thoughtful of Harry not to burn the gifts from Dobby as soon as he can. It would be so embarrassing if ANYONE saw them! I would love to knoe what Snape is thinking. Why would he even want to spend more time with Harry? And why demand servitude, possibly for the rest of his life?
Ren O'neil chapter 10 . 1/24/2014
are you going to add more? good start, now just push on through to the finish line and complete it.
kathyjo chapter 10 . 12/8/2013
it is too bad this story was never finished..i think there is more going on here..i believe that Dumbledore and severus know about the upcoming issues regarding the "murder" of his family so called on the life debt to keep him safe but could not tell him due to lack of occlumency as well as veritiserum...
heksie chapter 10 . 10/9/2013
ok, what a cliffhanger!
Limico chapter 10 . 7/11/2013
That was really interesting. I liked to read it and was dissapointed the moment it ended. I only wanted to say it is definitely worth an ending.
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