Reviews for The life that could only be achieved in death
nhrc chapter 1 . 9/29/2016
Reminded me the end of Shakespeare's play:
“For never was a story of more woe than this of Juliet and her Romeo.”
Tnunn2002 chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
I hate the kyo x tohru its suppose to be kyo x kagura and tohru x hatori
Tsubaki-Naoto chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
I think its kind of dissapointing I had better hopes but like they say set no expectations you will always be surprised set to big of expectations only lead to dissapointment
may96 chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
sad, but I do like it
Amber Skywalker Kenobi chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
I totally agree with you on the hatori and tohru pairing. I think they are just the cutest couple ever. I think it would be awesome if that pairing was in the series!
1loveangel chapter 1 . 10/12/2009



MysticSorceror chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Nice opening, I love the description. Eliminate the word "seemed", wow this scene seems so sad. There doesn't seem to be development of emotions. Grammar issues. Each other is two words not one. Repetition of words.

A few days later:

Yay Aya XD! I like this interaction between the characters.

Another day later:

And now it's Shigure. I really like the emotions between them. Wow that was really depressing, try to lengthen these scenes some.

A week later:

I love how you portray the emotions, this might sound weird but strengthen the emotions a bit. Some wrong words. Wow 0.0 that's crazy.

That night:

Wow that's pretty creepy and the dialogue needs to be better balanced, but it was nice to read.

Good work

silenttears321 chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
Oh my Gosh this story made me cry about ten lines in. I really liked it, thank you for this adorable pairing!

*~*~* silent
deadlykitty chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
too bad this is the only place. that coupling rocks, though I like her with any of the mabudachi trio to be perfectly honest (hence my own fanfics). great story, I loved it, though how did Hatori go to heaven when he committed suicide?
loretta537 chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
I love tohru/hatori pairings, but why kill them? how did tohru die anyways?
jdfkosjfoie chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
very sad very very very good and i was 'pouting'-right word? like the whole time but then i smiled at the 3rd to last sentence "is it somewhere we son't be bothered" and i smiled it was a little humorous :) loved it
Joni Da Pony chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
-sniff, sniff- god, i almost started crying! this is so sad. i like the hatori/tohru pairing too. it's actually one of my absolute fav. pairings. this story was actually sort of happy because they were together in the end. i just feel bad for everyone else. there were a lot of people who loved hatori and now that he's dead... I LUV HATORI! but if he died for tohru, it's all good. okay, sorry for my babbling, great oneshot and see ya!

Blueangel367 chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
so bitter sweet... but so beautiful..
bugaboo107 chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
OMG, so angsty and short. It was great! *sniffles* I can't bear to read about Ha'ri dying. Wha. Anyhoo, you are a great, powerful writer!

Keep it up! Hope to read more of your work soon!
TheWindAlchemist chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Was the ending up in heaven? Nice...
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