|Reviews for Come Clean|
| paniwi NLI chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
I loved it. Deep cute stories with non-abusive Bakura's are always welcome. Their views on the rain are nice -personally agrees with Bakura, rain is good- your characters are fleshed out and you get a bonuspoint for having Bakura call Ryou 'landlord' instead of 'yadonushi'
The rain sequence was cute too.
one thing though, at some points in the story you say "jade eyes" Jade is a rock. Yes, I know, that rock has the color of Ryou's eyes, but in that case you'd do better stating either Green eyes, or, if you must, Jade-green eyes."
For the rest, I love it.
| Cody Thomas chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
I like the rain too. It's pretty, and in the summer, it's alot of fun. You can always catch me dancing in it.
| T.Lei chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
That was sweet and very well written! I really enjoyed the way you had them interacting.
| Happiness's Deceit chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
TT: ...Wowie. Good! Um...Kai is unconscious, so ...I likey this lots! Good job!
| Hikari's-dark-side-08 chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Absolutley lovely, now I really like the rain..._ I really LOVE Tendershipping, you write them really well!
| Cymoril Avalon chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
Hey, I read this before I knew you! I just never reviewed XD
Heehee, this is pretty creepy, and yet...mildly fluffy at the same time. Almost a scary combination, considering who the characters are.
I really liked this! Yay!