Reviews for Lesser Languages
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
Yeah. Sad. :-( THX.
CottageGhost chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
I loved this. Your grasp of all three characters' voices is just fantastic, and your insight into Severus' and Minerva's personalities and nature is truly wonderful to behold. Add to that a great way with words and a good use of imagery, and you get a thoroughly enjoyable read. Well done!
HermioneHotchner1 chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
The feels! This was seriously so well written I wanted to cry at the end!
MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
riverrat chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
I usually don't like the pairing but this was truly wonderful. Very sad but beautifully written. Great job.
Raven's Dusk chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
I just finished reading this story at , and I'm crying. This story is so sad, but yet truly beautiful and wonderfully written. If you ever read this, then know that this is one of the best, most touching Snape-stories I ever read.
Deeply grateful for getting to read your story
Raven's Dusk
GreenCanary chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
sad story. poor severus
shhIwasn'there chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
man, you nearly made me cry! His life was simply not fair!
ambre gris chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
stories like this make wading through the muck worth it. simply wonderful.
DeengoBlue chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Mothwing chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Brilliantly done.
skinnydipping chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
That was beautiful. I loved it. I especially enjoyed how MM learned to read SS. The hands thing was great. And the last lines rocked my socks!

Kudos from Brazil!
moira of the mountain chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Absolutely brilliant. No more needs to be said.
Muirgen Monet chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Wonderfully brilliant, impossibly sad.
everyme chapter 1 . 6/3/2009

Great one shot. I really like the way you write and how you describe the character of Severus Snape. The impassive face is one of his trademarks, I think. Your idea to show to McGonagall what he thinks through his hands is really brilliant and an idea Ive never heard before.

The repetitions while depicting his relationship with others (Sympathy was met with disdain. Courtesy was met with insolence. Respect was met with mistrust. Compassion was met with near violence.) and also when desribing what every movement of his hand means emphasize his distant and cold character even more.

And I also really like the ending of your story. When Snape describes what he sees to McGonagall, I had to smile a little at imagining Snape as a very young boy, and the meaning McGonagall sees in this made me a little sad. After all, dont we all want to change some aspects of our past? Of course, Snape wants to start a new life instead of changing little things, and this realization is pretty depressive, I guess.

So, really well-written story :)

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