|Reviews for Clash of Federations|
| Guest chapter 30 . 1/1
Does this continue?
| orionastro chapter 30 . 11/5/2015
Very good story so far, I hope you can update soon.
| majorshane chapter 21 . 10/23/2015
Great story so far!
Hey Guest, what do you mean choose? Common Era is the newer way to list the date, it is far better than Anno Domini because it doesn't force people who aren't Christian to recognize the alleged conception and birth of Jesus Christ. RenS didn't CHOOSE the CE moniker, its the way the whole world recognizes the dating system. It's more secular and fair. Lastly, why would the author loose a LOT of respect? Is there something wrong with Common Era? I'm not being a smart $$ I am seriously asking...
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/24/2015
The fact you chose to rename Anno Domini to Common Era.
You just lost a LOT of respect.
| Rihanna Sedai Brown Ajah chapter 30 . 1/3/2015
Absolutely brilliant. I hope this story is continued one day.
Kiu Q ?
| Chris Adair chapter 30 . 2/2/2014
This is really good. Can tell that slot of effort had gone into it.
| aDarkOne chapter 29 . 12/20/2013
I hope this story is still alive.
| aDarkOne chapter 30 . 11/18/2013
I wonder what the heck the Empress's 'god' is?
| aDarkOne chapter 24 . 11/17/2013
Yes T'Pol, Captain Archer is a hypocrite (and often a dumbass).
| aDarkOne chapter 11 . 11/16/2013
The Vulcans from this era kind of remind me of the asari from Mass Effect.
| justjoe chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
B5/ST is my favorite crossover scene. I've read most of them and really tried to read this one, but couldn't. The concept is great, but my main problem is Enterprise. I didn't like the show, but tried to look passed that for the story.
Archer never had a strong command presence and that is evident here. Someone who can be the anchor for the story. As it is, there is all of this activity going on where I feel that I am wondering from place to place without a base. Earth and humans are too broad and none of the characters were really that compelling.
So I think that the story suffers because the characters aren't strong enough to carry the narrative, which left me bored. I haven't had this problem with any of the other better crossovers.
| Shadownight1389 chapter 30 . 5/31/2013
Hope to see an update soon. Still following the story.
| Sora with an S chapter 30 . 5/20/2013
We are all stuffed...
| Lerris chapter 4 . 2/13/2013
This is not bad so far, but this behavior seems inconsistent with minbari honor. I would have expected them to talk a little once the vulcans came.
| bogus1 chapter 13 . 9/2/2012
In this story, you made Delenn hold the Smart Ball while Archer and Starfleet hold the Idiot Ball. As much as I despise the latter, that's actually canon with that travesty of a show Enterprise. The real problem is that Delenn in B5 canon is mentally weak and she's incapable of putting together an argument. There's lots of people SAYING Delenn is some great leader and bowing before her and revering her, but the truth is that the moment she's faced with any kind of challenge at all, she is contemptible.
The Inquisitor was right about Delenn: "What a sad thing you are. Unable to answer even such a simple question without falling back on references, and genialities and what other people call you. Have you nothing of your own? Nothing to stand on that is not provided, defined, delineated, stamped, sanctioned, numbered, and approved by others? How can you be expected to fight for someone else when you haven't the faintest idea who you are?"
And it's absolutely true. Delenn is NOTHING. Except she's not sad or pathetic at all, she is contemptible.