|Reviews for Never Look Back Part Two|
| EmSyd chapter 7 . 7/16/2006
| dannynmartin chapter 7 . 5/10/2005
Another nice story. Timeline's sounds right too(I've always thought Danny's been there longer than Sam). You write a very real Danny.
| Laura B chapter 7 . 3/5/2005
I agree. I think Danny's job has grounded him and made him sort his life out. your stories are really good. Hope to read more soon.
| Mariel3 chapter 7 . 3/5/2005
From now on, I won't be able to consider any other version of Danny's past. This was totally believeable. His going to Miami was a little complicated and I felt as though your writing broke its rhythm a bit during it, but wow, this was a story you should be very proud of. It was a wonderful, can't-leave-until-I've-finished-it piece of writing! I've VERY much looking forward to the next part!
| Mariel3 chapter 6 . 3/5/2005
This was...wow. Loved it. Your idea of the pivotal event in his life that set him straight was so believeable...like I said, I loved it. The final scene, of course, was totally heart-rending. Beautiful writing. Keep it up!
| Mariel3 chapter 5 . 3/5/2005
Oh, my heavens. This whole chapter was totally awesome. Danny's reaction was totally understandable, and the ending to this chapter...wow.
| Mariel3 chapter 4 . 3/5/2005
Ph, I'm loving this!
| Mariel3 chapter 3 . 3/5/2005
Okay...a little voice in my head was screaming "WHAT? He didn't notice the RING?". On the other hand...breath-takingly good scenes here. Their attraction for one another leaps off the page.
| Mariel3 chapter 2 . 3/5/2005
Why do I feel there's more than meets the eye in regard to Katie's reaction? This was excellent. I'm glad things aren't too easy. Their meeting was very well written.
| Mariel3 chapter 1 . 3/5/2005
Hey! Enjoyed this beginning chapter. The flashback with Payton was a little disappointing, but only because there was little of her and what she was feeling in it. I'd have liked to have seen more of her inner workings. You made her seem a very real (if not very likeable) character, then kinda dropped her without showing if she had developed at all. On the other hand, I loved all the other stuff. I was very glad Danny went to the trial and liked reading his observations.
My favourite line: "Everything's hard, Sheila. I'm used to it." The context in which that was said was absolutely Danny-perfect. Nice job, and now on to the next chapter!
| Hockey Gurl chapter 7 . 3/4/2005
I loved it! Please let Katie come back too! PLEASE!
| Chachakala chapter 7 . 3/4/2005
What a great ending! Though, of course, I can't wait for the next installment! I can never find anything wrong with your stories!
| SusanWATfan chapter 7 . 3/4/2005
Great Part II. Can't wait to read more!
| everydaymushroomhead chapter 7 . 3/4/2005
WOW, what a nice ending for this story! I can't wait to read part 3.
| SpyMaster chapter 6 . 3/4/2005
Thank god Katie is ok. I was worried there for a moment. Poor Danny but at least he's straightened out. Really really good, I can't wait for the next part but sad at the same time that it's going to be over.