Reviews for Deception
neeniya chapter 18 . 11/9/2015
I think I know where Jazz's train of thought was going there. If I'm right, damn that got dark. (Good story so far, came upon it today)
hypercell chapter 3 . 4/7/2014
They are SOOO being overshadowed...
Guest chapter 35 . 1/9/2014
PLEASE don't tell me it's DxOC...
CinnamonPearl517 chapter 7 . 10/2/2013
Please ignore my first review. I get it now. I'm a bit slow.
CinnamonPearl517 chapter 5 . 10/2/2013
I like the fanfiction so far, but something in chapter five really bothered me, and that was Sam's reaction and treatment towards Danny. That was completely out of character for her, with no reasonable explanation as to why she even acted that way. It could have been played out better. I like the rest of the fic so far, but that just didn't work.
FashionablyHospitable chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
They'll be overshadowed. WON'T THEY. Aww, man.
a name is a name is a name chapter 36 . 4/3/2012
You know, I've finished the entire story in about 3 hours. Now I'm gonna start the next one.

I don't know whether to punch you in the face for wasting my free time, or turn lesbian and force you to marry me. Either way, i'll probably get a restraining order...

You. Are. Astounding... (in a good way)
a name is a name is a name chapter 36 . 4/3/2012
You know, I've finished the entire story in about 3 hours. Now I'm gonna start the next one.

I don't know whether to punch you in the face for wasting my free time, or turn lesbian and force you to marry me. Either way, i'll probably get a restraining order...

You. Are. Astounding... (in a good way)
a name is a name is a name chapter 7 . 4/3/2012
Oh god. This is the fanfiction I've been wading through seas of romantic-Mary-sue trash for!

In this one chapter, my heart broke, I yelled at the screen to one of the characters to "get the facts straight, nimrod!" (and I quote) and was so amazed/confused I fell off my chair.

Congrats! You have won the interwebs.
foxglove66 chapter 36 . 5/2/2010
I really liked this story! But I was confused with what Jazz, Sam and Tucker knew. At the beginning of the story it seems like Sam and Tucker know that Jazz is in on Danny's secret but then in the middle after Danny runs away they don't know. And if this story happened after Danny meets Dark Dan then wouldn't Sam, Tucker and Jazz all know that Vlad is a half ghost. Those parts really confused me but even with that I loved the drama and mystery of the story.
julia chapter 35 . 3/18/2010
god i loved this book i read it about 5 times already and thats how many stars im going to give you

5 stars *
ghostgal4 chapter 36 . 1/9/2010
Aw man that was so good! PLEASE make a new book! I cant wait to find out what happens!
starr1095 chapter 36 . 6/24/2009
that was really good iloved it simply awsome
inukagome15 chapter 36 . 4/4/2008
Great story! I felt really sorry for Danny the whole time I was reading it.
MutantLover09 chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
awesome
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