Reviews for Deception
hypercell chapter 3 . 4/7/2014
They are SOOO being overshadowed...
Guest chapter 35 . 1/9/2014
PLEASE don't tell me it's DxOC...
CinnamonPearl517 chapter 7 . 10/2/2013
Please ignore my first review. I get it now. I'm a bit slow.
CinnamonPearl517 chapter 5 . 10/2/2013
I like the fanfiction so far, but something in chapter five really bothered me, and that was Sam's reaction and treatment towards Danny. That was completely out of character for her, with no reasonable explanation as to why she even acted that way. It could have been played out better. I like the rest of the fic so far, but that just didn't work.
FashionablyHospitable chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
They'll be overshadowed. WON'T THEY. Aww, man.
a name is a name is a name chapter 36 . 4/3/2012
You know, I've finished the entire story in about 3 hours. Now I'm gonna start the next one.

I don't know whether to punch you in the face for wasting my free time, or turn lesbian and force you to marry me. Either way, i'll probably get a restraining order...

You. Are. Astounding... (in a good way)
a name is a name is a name chapter 36 . 4/3/2012
You know, I've finished the entire story in about 3 hours. Now I'm gonna start the next one.

I don't know whether to punch you in the face for wasting my free time, or turn lesbian and force you to marry me. Either way, i'll probably get a restraining order...

You. Are. Astounding... (in a good way)
a name is a name is a name chapter 7 . 4/3/2012
Oh god. This is the fanfiction I've been wading through seas of romantic-Mary-sue trash for!

In this one chapter, my heart broke, I yelled at the screen to one of the characters to "get the facts straight, nimrod!" (and I quote) and was so amazed/confused I fell off my chair.

Congrats! You have won the interwebs.
foxglove66 chapter 36 . 5/2/2010
I really liked this story! But I was confused with what Jazz, Sam and Tucker knew. At the beginning of the story it seems like Sam and Tucker know that Jazz is in on Danny's secret but then in the middle after Danny runs away they don't know. And if this story happened after Danny meets Dark Dan then wouldn't Sam, Tucker and Jazz all know that Vlad is a half ghost. Those parts really confused me but even with that I loved the drama and mystery of the story.
julia chapter 35 . 3/18/2010
god i loved this book i read it about 5 times already and thats how many stars im going to give you

5 stars *
ghostgal4 chapter 36 . 1/9/2010
Aw man that was so good! PLEASE make a new book! I cant wait to find out what happens!
starr1095 chapter 36 . 6/24/2009
that was really good iloved it simply awsome
inukagome15 chapter 36 . 4/4/2008
Great story! I felt really sorry for Danny the whole time I was reading it.
MutantLover09 chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
awesome
dizappearingirl chapter 36 . 12/30/2006
So, yeah...

I read your whole story in one swoop...O_O...Did I really just do that? 36 FREAKIN CHAPS IN A ROW! I must have gone mad...yesh...this is the only reasonable explanation. I've gone mad...staying up late (really late) and reading a whole story...yesh. I've gone completely mad...crazy...out of it...yeah...

WELL despite my slight anger at myself for keeping myself up so late, twas an AMAZING story (dude, I read it all in one night-THAT MEANS SOMETHING! Cuz, why would I stay up late for a story I didn't like? LOGICAL ANSWER: I LOVED IT!)_ Twas really cool.

One of my first thoughts when his parents voices were different and they acted strange when Danny first told them was "THEY'RE OVERSHADOWED DANNY! CAN'T YOU SENSE IT!" Then, I found out that apparantly he can't...in the series he did, but for your story it was alright that he couldn't!

SO, then my next major thought was "Why the heck did he go to New York? That's kinda weird...but maybe I'm just weird...heh...sounds good to me!"

AND THEN HE FREAKIN CALLED VLADDYMAN! ARG! "NO DANNY NO! NOT VLADDY-CHAN! HE SET YOU UP! HE FREAKIN SET YOU UP! DON'T BUY IT! DON'T FLY ON NO FREAKIN FIRST CLASS AIRPLANE! WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU THINKING! IDIOT!...sorry! Your not an idiot...just depressed...okay, okay..."

SO, then there was the whole what-is-Vladdycakes-next-plan? problem (which by the way...you had a very nice and unique twist on Vlad's motives...I mean, they're the same basic I-want-Danny-as-my-apprentice-and-Maddie-as-my-wife plots but with a very unique Danny-is-dangerous twist that I loved) So I'm all glaring at Vladatron thinking: "What are you up to? HUH! WHAT ARE YOU PLOTTING! STOP IT!" Yesh...

Then there was the Alesha twist...I liked her and she was pretty nifty nifty. I mean CMON! She has that cool art-science place and she gave up EVERYTHING to help them! EVEN HER BROTHER! AND WHY THE HECK DID VLADDY HAVE TO RUIN IT! STUPID VLADSICLE AND MILLER-MAN! GO AWAY! ~glaring~

SO, all in all twas pretty cool and absolutely amazing and I'm still weirded out that I stayed up so late and I'm really tired and now I realize I'm starting to babble...heh...I already babbled this whole review out...maybe I should get some sleep... _ G'night. Sleep tight. Hope dee dream bugs bite tonight! _
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