Reviews for The Price of Freedom |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I usually don't review until I've read all existing chapters of a fic, but you made me laugh, and only with the character list! It's like this: all of the Naberries are simply 'unaware' of Padme's marriage. Then Obi-Wan is 'completely oblivious'. It cracked me up. Poor Obi-Wan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story. maybe have ruwee have secretly known all along about ani and padme, and after he relays his disappointment but understanding about her hiding it from him, he suggests some ideas to her about how to get out of the mess? or be bold and have padme declare that ani is her husband and luke and leia are their kids right before the wedding infront of everyone or something. or ani breaking in and stopping the wedding after he wakes up. i dunno do whatever but post more soon! i want to know how you unravel it all! :) PPS |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how much detail you put into each chapter :) It makes the story flow very nicely; looking forward to ur next update |
![]() ![]() awesome I love this story please keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I heart your story! Truely immensely! I can't wait to see what happens...I just wish there was more dialogue to explain everything...But maybe it is because that's just me lol...But I love your story and I hope you continue soon. -Legolover |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! Poor Anakin! I hope everything will turn out ok... please, keep writing! I love your stories and this one is really, really good. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well you certainly left some suspense for us! Thrilled to see you've updated too and hope that bout of writer's block is cured :D Still looking forward to see how this all unravels! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well I think it's a great storie, and hope to read more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() try making your chapters longer |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful, as always. Great detail (the chapter was a bit too short, though!) Please update soon. fath8252 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh... evil. Too bad it's short. Ah well, its quality makes up for lacking quantity (as always). I love this fic! Please do update it soon! |
![]() ![]() Ma, Anakin's gonna be pissed when he wakes up. Ekert is really asking for a death sentence. On a different note, I'm glad to see you're still writing this story, as it's an enjoyable fic. Keep up the good work. Cheers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awsome work. Keep it up. |