|Reviews for Love Hina: Deserted|
| Starfire99 chapter 17 . 8/17/2013
It's been WAY more than 6 months this time. It's been 15 MONTHS since you last touched this story. When are you planning on updating it? 2025?
| YourFan11 chapter 17 . 3/30/2013
Great story. I am enjoying it. It's been almost a year now since last up date your keeping me on the edge of my seat. Thirsty for more XD anyways keep up the good work and in the future of the story there could be an epiloge and you could wrap it up where the happy couple have a baby. Just a thought anyways thanks for awesome story so far. If Shinobu's happy I'm happy :p update soon!
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/5/2012
Sigh, one tragedy after another, it actually feels rather annoying to tell you the truth and a bit too much like a plot device to feel right.
| Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 14 . 5/5/2012
Alright now your being a f***ing bore. When the f**k are going to bring in the bitch Naru and really let the fireworks fly? Huh? Cause until then your putting people to sleep here, doing all I can to keep myself awake.
| nathalist chapter 17 . 4/22/2012
I've read your story from start to finish and I'm disappointed that I havent found it sooner! By all means, please keep going.
| gale1243 chapter 17 . 4/19/2012
Another great chapter man, and I like the idea of 3 large story arcs (just please don't let there be as much as a delay as last time. Your readers are very eager to see what happens
One final word
Either introduce her in this arc, or in one of the later arcs, but Naru needs to be introduced and needs to get her just desserts
| insomniac1970 chapter 17 . 4/12/2012
Welcome back! I like how it's Shinobu who's impatient with the pace of the relationship, and not Keitaro. Although I believe he would be dragging his feet about getting sexual no matter who it was. I'm hoping for a nice make-out scene and the prelude to them FINALLY making love. Nice chapter. I hope life allows to get rhe next one written soon. Peace!
| Qaletaqa chapter 16 . 3/4/2012
Gotta say I'm really hoping you hurry up and release the next chapter, I'm going through withdrawal here.
| DeactivatedAccount111 chapter 15 . 12/12/2011
Awesome fanfic. I'am lookin forward to the next chapter. Good work.
| gale1243 chapter 16 . 12/6/2011
Wow my first review.
So anyway, I've been following this story for a while now, and I just have to say that you sir (or mam) are amazing. I love the storyline and if there is pne critisism I have to offer it is this. Naru needs to be brought into this story, just for her to be hated by everyone. Cheating on Keitaro, then divorcing him, taking everything and leaving him homeless, and destroying Hinata-sou without a single thought of remorse deserves Karma's backhand to the face. Bring Naru in, and let her fall, HARD!
| Blacksword Zero chapter 16 . 11/7/2011
Interesting,but have you planned some punishment for Naru? She had to be punished;Harshly!
Please update fast!
| ogihcI ikasoruK chapter 16 . 10/23/2011
haaaa, i'm sorry to say this, but with not being updated for a few years, i've lost the passion for reading this, it's not you, or the story, don't get me wrong, it's i had a mindset going with it while reading this, and i've lost it. it was a good story, but it's not a story for me anymore.
| Higashiyama Sayuri's Devout chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Published 6 and a half years ago...?
Is this going to be a one time only update, or are you going to update regularly until you finish it?
I like the intro but the title should be "Lady(Shinobu) and The Tramp(Keitaro)"
Loving the show since October 1982.
| Nysk chapter 16 . 10/23/2011
| SentiNel090 chapter 16 . 10/23/2011
GASP! IT LIVES!
And straight to action... Or well, something like that, anyway :P
Good to have you back.