Reviews for What I can't have
Melancholic Marshmallow chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
I love this, it's really awesome. I think you captured Chise's feelings perfectly. Very good work! :)

other reviewers: In the anime Chise gets turned into the Ultimate Weapon after she meets Shuji, but in the manga its unspecified (I assume this fic IS for the manga, but I could be wrong).
golden-eyedwolf842 chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
I like this poem very much. I agree. it's very sad. Anyways, I don't know much about Saikano, but it's okay. :P


TamasineRyu chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
Not bad, but I do see one thing story wise.

When she first asked him out, she wasn't the ultimate weapon yet.

Sorry, other than that I liked it. good job.
JPmetal chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
I love this poem!:)

It's so sad!
Victoria chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
GREAT POEM! It has a lot of emotion in it. I really enjoyed reading it!
MysticSorceror chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
I love your poetry

You rock my unmatching Dobby style socks

Mystic _-
TsukiyomiItachi chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
Thats a really nice poem and all.

One thing though: Chise becomes the Ultimate Weapon that same night as they walked home from their first kiss and all.

Watch Vol 1 [ Episode 1 ] of Saikano on DVD.