Reviews for Life in the Hollow
Bob chapter 7 . 10/14/2010
Your story is really rubbish. There is no suspense. No emotion. You just say what happened really shortly. We need to see events occur. Describe things actually happening and characters actually saying things for us to enjoy the journey. You just gloss over everything that happens without us having a chance to enjoy it.

Plus you give Chris way too much credit. Make him how he is - a dead beat smarmy ass who does not deserve the re-writing of his character you have done.
lorelai chapter 7 . 11/15/2005
Luke'sGirl chapter 7 . 10/28/2005
It was good, but you need to go more in detail, ther was no dialog after like the third chapter, and no indiviual feelings and toughts.
gilmoreaddict chapter 7 . 3/1/2005
this was cute. theres no conflict and thats nice every once in a while. good job
gilmoregirlfreak chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Like it alot. Reading it more the second time right now.
Kimmers chapter 5 . 2/28/2005
Love this so much can't wait for more, this is a brillant update can't wait for the wedding.
dadswell chapter 5 . 2/28/2005
symrsmrdr chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
I really like it so far!
kbg027 chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
this is a cool story, please update
dadswell chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
cOOlneSS...keep going
Kimmers chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
This is good very good love the outlook on this fic can't wait for more.