Reviews for Ordinary People
turbomagnus chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
Applause. Both for an enjoyable fanfic and for the very inventive proposal therein. It took me a minute to catch it, but it was a wonderful touch.
cardcaptor eternity chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
AAGH! the spiral sun idea was so cute and inventive! good job! ::claps::

~carcaptor eternity
x se chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
I THINK Uzamaki means whirlpool (Naruto's clan symbol) and Hinata means bright place. Ah well, I liekd it lots.
minimerc chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
Nice, Lazy-san! _ I don't know the song, but it fit nicely. Kawaii desu yo! Ja ne

Da Squeakz chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
good job. i liked your fic. interesting idea of the spiral sun thing.
TimeShifter chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
Very nice. OOC, yes, but it was still good. Hope to see more from you in the future.
Seductive Venus chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
hi! i love your fic! i'm so sowee if i didn't get to be the first on to review but heck... thanks! arigaotu lazy-kun! i wont ever forget this. it's such a pretty fic! naruto and hinata is in character and the song fits them so well! *glomps*
Aliaandraa chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
that's kawaii! So sweet!
moonlightpath chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
That's a sweet story! I never knew that Uzumaki meant spiral and that Hinata meant sun, well I guess you'll always learn something new everyday!