Reviews for Breathing
cje24576 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
This was very good. Lots of good imagery (especially ROTS-related). That breathing sound is so creepy! Very well-done.
Mrs. Kenobi chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
When I was reading this, I started making the "suck-hiss" noise just for fun. My little sister rushed towards me, screaming, "She's choking!"

Uh...I guess I don't have a good Darth Vader impression...;)

Anyways, I absolutely LOVE this! I've read this a couple times, but I don't know if I've reviewed. Anyways...good job, flawless style.
Capitano chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
Fantastic story! I love it!
HardToScare211 chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
Oh, sad. Nice nice nice, but sad. I loved how the thoughts were a little broken and random (no offense) and how there was just the right ammount of mystery:) Nice job
i luv ewansmile chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
wow! that was really good! luved it! my only wish is that you would write more Obi-wan Kenobi stories!
Alley Parker chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
Oh that was so good! I realy likes that it was so sweet!
Artemis 00 chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Great piece. I especially like the last line. Vader's breathing. In my mind I didn't read the words, I *heard* it. It's a perfect effect.
Natgel chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Wonderful foreshadowing. I love it.
GalitMirav chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
Very nice. May the Force be with you.
aelfa chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
Short but powerful. Well done!
LVB chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
concise and to the point - bravo! Great fic, played on the old heartstrings :) love the interaction between Master & Padawan.
shadowcat15 chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
I liked it. Short, but depressing. I think the last part with Anakin breathing had the most effect on me.
liz chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
Good story, with sad foreshadowing. I like it!
Padawan Sydney Bristow chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
aww! this is so sweet! I like this alot!
Pokey1984 chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
A very powerful vingette. I started out stunned, when I read this. Now I've graduated to impressed.

You've captured so many things in this small scene. So many emotions from both characters.

I think you've prtrayed Obi-Wan perfectly. His entier thought process and everything he feels for and about Anakin comes through so vividly.

Really, fabulous Job!
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