|Reviews for My Fragile Mortality|
| Jeanalvernia chapter 2 . 11/26/2013
| domolove19 chapter 2 . 7/1/2013
I loved it. You did a very nice job with the story.
| Rexnos chapter 2 . 11/29/2012
I've read a lot of Naruto fan fiction, but I don't think I've ever seen this ship. The age gap is a little weird, but I can appreciate anything that makes Hinata suffer less. It's funny that I like her character and hate it at the same time. I like how something as simple as the neglect and disdain of her father has turned her into such a timid girl. I dislike how she seems to just let it all happen. In summary, she seems very realistic and I just dislike that reality.
| woodlandfairykirk chapter 2 . 11/6/2012
| signifytheworld chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
I love this coupleeee (: It is so adorable! And your writing is ahmazing... This was a great two-shot
| yume824 chapter 2 . 3/5/2012
I must say that I enjoyed the epilogue more than the original oneshot, but that's just my opinion. I can say, however, that I liked it overall. I like how Hinata has grown up and isn't quite as shy as before and Itachi can never be better. He's always awesome so it's an automatically added bonus. Here it is, short and sweet: cute and a bit of an adrenaline rush all packed into a twoshot. Bravo!
| Luka chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
two words awe-some!
| Pumpkin bells chapter 2 . 6/30/2011
I liked it sooo , badly! I won't demand a sequel, but I'd love one, for sure!
| Pumpkin bells chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
That was amazing! I just loved the last sentence!
And little Hinata was so cute and wise, adorable! I really thoght you wrote it wonderfully.
Itacho was too cool for me to handle him...joking
| harley944 chapter 2 . 1/5/2011
| shadow of the lost chapter 2 . 8/10/2010
gotta love me some itahina!
| realityfling18 chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
| Darth-Taisha chapter 2 . 4/4/2009
Nice job, I really liked it.
| Apple Of The Sand chapter 2 . 1/13/2009
Wow! This is an amazingly written fic! XD I'm a little disappointed that you don't want to continue, but I suppose that's your right. Anyway, I was really inspired by reading this!
| WhiteDemoness11 chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
Well done. Not a happy ending, not a sad ending, just a 'they met up and went on with their lives.' And all rather IC. *claps*