Reviews for Four Makes an Army
Cossack716 chapter 2 . 11/1/2005
a pretty good story so far, plz update
nisdbnisrgbise chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
Meh. Just meh. It wasn't all that great. It was a decent first try but even for a no action story it was still just sorta "meh". You di a good job describing things but you should have said what the face mask looked like. Next time though focus more on the actoiny things you'll lead up to instead of just you know.