|Reviews for The Brightest Day|
| JimmnyCricket chapter 1 . 5/9
Please write more
| Kyubi9 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
HI YA! Kyubi9 here saying I really like this story and hope you update soon.
Well Thats All SEE YA!
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
It's not a bad premise for a story, but it needs some work. You leave much too much
out by assuming the reader already knows of it. The difference in rings and the appearances
of people and items for one.
| DragonArmada chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
i like it alot it shows creativity and an idea that i thought was going out of style.
| Layce74 chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
This is really good. Please don't have X just bumble around like an idiot.