I like the story so far but the descriptions of the norn were kind of boring to read. Personally, I like to put descriptions in with actions. Like, instead of "He had a shabby golden coat, with silver streaks" you could say something "A cold wind ruffled Luetha's golden fur revealing its silvery streaks." Just a suggestion. It's okay if that's not your style. Man, this was a long review!

Yay Nornagon! It's me, Anduin. -

It's great that you're writing a fic about Creatures, and it looks good so far. I am also writing a story currently, and it will probably be posted tomorrow if not today. ANYWAY! Please continue. :)

really cool idea, to write about Creatures. I haven't seen any others so far! Good job, I hope you continue it.