Hey!

This seems good for someone your age:D

However i did notice a few grammatical errors, but that is something that can be fixed with a beta-reader:D

Overall this seems really good, and hope to see more from it;D

Update soon:D

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By the way, I like the penname lol

im not trying to be mean or anything- but Luna IS a gryffindor.

Hi I like your story but ti has quiet alot of mistakes init though and i can't be your beta cause im as bad as you are but i have spell cheak hehe so i'm leving you STRANDED (evil laugh) i like the story though