Reviews for PLANET
Gabriel Ice chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
This poem seems to flow, sort of like the water Claude mentions. Sort of like an ocean of stars. The words go back and forth, and they repeat, and the rhymes come irregularly. This poem is like sitting on the beach.

Very thoughtful of him to take perspective into account when calling something alien. Kinda anti-Star Trek.
SyntheticNeko chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
That was good! Your very good! ]