|Reviews for The Youth of the Pykamain|
| Wolves Call chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
Intresting i like.
| Spontaneite chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
I review, and I am now. But most of all I review to nag authors to continue their good stories!
| Bob the CAT chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
i thought it was cute...owning Creatures3, i love my little norns! At first i thought it might be corny, but i was pleasantly suprised
| Bananawings72 chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
I really like it! oit has a good potential, so don't give up now!
| norn freak chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
pretty good story! try reading my story The New Albia!
| Bulba1 chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
A shee/norn splice? What an original idea. I hope you write some more soon. :)
| Heia Corcovoda chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
All i have to say is this about my story... i'd seek help... but they won't let me outta the psyche ward to go seek any... dang authorities... good story too
| malkin chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
I like the new time scale, and the language that you've used in the story - I almost felt like I was watching Lisa run around. I'm finding it hard to imagine what the shee/norn baby looks like, though. It's an interesting idea, splicing a shee with a norn.
| TheSilverTopHat chapter 1 . 3/5/2005
This is really good! I personally like the format.
You use description very well in your story. I'll definatley be checking back for any updates on this.
I especially like the notes at the back about time measurements.
Keep up the good work!
| Officer 1BDI chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
Ack! You killed off the Lone Shee? *sniff* I want to know how he died...
But I digress. I like what you've posted so far. I'm curious about the characters, especially Lisa and her mum (what, for instance, posessed Zarkee to gene-splice her stillborn with the Lone Shee?). I'm interested in seeing where you take this story.