Reviews for The Youth of the Pykamain
Wolves Call chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
Intresting i like.
Spontaneite chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
I review, and I am now. But most of all I review to nag authors to continue their good stories!
Bob the CAT chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
i thought it was cute...owning Creatures3, i love my little norns! At first i thought it might be corny, but i was pleasantly suprised
Bananawings72 chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
I really like it! oit has a good potential, so don't give up now!
norn freak chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
pretty good story! try reading my story The New Albia!
Bulba1 chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
A shee/norn splice? What an original idea. I hope you write some more soon. :)
Heia Corcovoda chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
All i have to say is this about my story... i'd seek help... but they won't let me outta the psyche ward to go seek any... dang authorities... good story too
malkin chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
I like the new time scale, and the language that you've used in the story - I almost felt like I was watching Lisa run around. I'm finding it hard to imagine what the shee/norn baby looks like, though. It's an interesting idea, splicing a shee with a norn.
TheSilverTopHat chapter 1 . 3/5/2005
This is really good! I personally like the format.

You use description very well in your story. I'll definatley be checking back for any updates on this.

I especially like the notes at the back about time measurements.

Keep up the good work!
Officer 1BDI chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
Ack! You killed off the Lone Shee? *sniff* I want to know how he died...

But I digress. I like what you've posted so far. I'm curious about the characters, especially Lisa and her mum (what, for instance, posessed Zarkee to gene-splice her stillborn with the Lone Shee?). I'm interested in seeing where you take this story.