Wow an incredible story. I have been reading storylines for a decade and believe this is the first I have found with an ending plot like this. Thank you for the creation, was a fun read. Hard to find something new and quality when you have read over 900 fics. Thanks again

Dues owed

Thank you for the wonderful journey. I felt you really get Harry. Hes neigher light nor black and thats something i feel i n love with back in 1999 when i first read prisoner of Azkaban. Your story was riveting and an adventure.
I didnt read everyline but i hope my review helps.

This story is so good! However, I hope you can edit the format for it to be easier to read. The awkward line breaks and spaces are a bit too distracting huhu. Thank you.

This was wonderful.

A real magnificent story. Very well thought out plot and characters.

I liked Harry's speech but it felt somewhat incomplete.

I doubt you will even see this review as this is the most recent of your stories (On this site at least. I don't know if you may be writing on any other sites.) but I am wondering if English is a second language for you as there are so many misspelled words and grammar errors.

But as far as the'feel' of the story, I do like a strong, independent, gray Harry much better than Rowling's weaker Harry.

Une histoire incroyable ! J'ai été transportée !
Parfois un peu confuse et d'autre fois complètement perdue (tout comme Harry), mais tout s'éclaire à la fin.
C'était passionnant. Original. Enivrant.
Merci pour cette superbe histoire !

I can't believe I've missed (skipped) this story before! So very different, even just the interactions with Ron and Hermione, it was a joy to read.

Wow. I am quite speechless. I was looking for something random to read and I found your link. Wow. My mind is still processing. You have done an amazing job on this story. All the characters are fully fledged out. I love the additional characters - they served purpose and so well written.

Thank you for sharing your story. It has touched me (I finally broke down and created a ffnet account to let you know how much your story touched me.)

A brilliant story, perhaps I read twice. However even though I know the author cant do much but go back and edit which they shall do, this story has too many spelling and grammatical errors. And frankly both times I read it has annoyed me greatly.

Okay, this is, and I do not use this descriptor lightly, epic. Nice and unusual final battle and that ending was totally unexpected, I admit. There is a desperate need of proof reading, but otherwise this fanfic is pretty darn good. Especially for something that was done back in 2007 - we have a lot of fanfics done since then and not all of them half as good as this. I like how the ancient bloodlines came to play, reminiscent of Basilisk Born. Making Harry half a Seer and building on that is a nice and unusual touch too.
Thank you for the story.

Very disappointed in this chapter. Leaving would-be kidnappers scot free. Really wish he would've just discreetly off them without any trace and then pretend he wasn't there at all.

Eh, what a blunder that final scene.
First, Tonks is not the only half-blood there. Snape, literally the half-blood prince, anyone?
Second, it's not Name Surname1 Surname2 like in spanish-speaking countries (and even there it's paternal, then maternal surnames, not vice versa). It should be Name Surname2, neé Surname1. And even then it's applicable to Andromeda only, because Nymphadora do not technically hold Black surname anyways, he was born Tonks. Best she can get is Nymphadora Tonks, lesser family branch of Most Ancient and Noble House of Black. Great story, but sheesh, some brushin up is in order here.

Great story so far, but lack of formating and a lot of orthographical errors make it really hard to read. Most glaring example would a persistant usage of "where" in place of "were".