|Reviews for Reign of Power|
| Delicious darkness chapter 10 . 3/12
This story was really promising. The idea seemed very interesting and I liked the way you described Harry. The spelling errors, however, are so distracting that I find myself unable to continue reading this story.
I hope that you decide to revise this story one day, because I think that it is really good.
I'm not saying this to be mean. It's just that reading countless sentences where you've written 'where' when it should have been 'were' among other errors sort of ruined the joy one would usually experience when reading such a fascinating story.
| Delicious darkness chapter 4 . 3/12
Love the story so far, though there are some errors which you might want to think about editing out. Nothing terrible, but there are quite a few mistakes where you have written: 'where' when there should have been a 'were'.
| Uncertain Shifter chapter 29 . 3/3
I certainly didn't expect that!
This was an interesting story.
| Uncertain Shifter chapter 18 . 3/2
What is it with crazies naming Harry their Heir?
First Sirius, then Voldemort, and now Aberforth Dumbledore/Gryffindor!
He just can't catch a break, can he?
| selena1234 chapter 18 . 1/31
AWOL means Absent WithOut Leave! HAH! I love google!
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/29
I just came across this story. I absolutely love your writing style. It almost jumps off the page for me, and is very similar to my own. I am in love with this story, and honestly, have been since the first chapter! I only hope that this still makes it to you all these years later :)
| Lahmikhara chapter 29 . 1/29
Loved the story, and I must say this is prolly the most original ending I've ever read on fanfiction :-)
Great job and I look forward to checking out the next part of this story.
| Srangled Steps chapter 1 . 1/18
| Soby chapter 29 . 1/14
I truly enjoyed reading this story and I couldn't put it down unless I had some other things to tend to. I have read a lot of fanfiction and I can say that your story has by far been the few that have made me want to review.
The manipulations and subtle inclinations and rebellion so artfully captured in the word marvel that you have produced is a masterpiece in its own accord.
It was a great journey reading and experiencing the world of Harry Potter with you. You have the gift of becoming a good writer if focused.
Theres one thing I would like to point is you need to definitely have a beta reader to fix the small word problems like the use of 'where' and 'were'. Other than that, a job well done.
| Eien Michi chapter 29 . 12/2/2013
Spent 7 hours of my life reading this. NO REGRETS.
| glitch-e-r-749 chapter 24 . 11/27/2013
what of lupin? he alive?
| glitch-e-r-749 chapter 17 . 11/27/2013
why do you always say TBC? good plot love the story
| brainthief chapter 29 . 11/14/2013
A very gripping story. Plenty of action, suspense and twists. Thank you for writing this, I greatly enjoyed reading it.
| Binka chapter 29 . 11/8/2013
This has been one of the most gripping stories i've ever read, and not just on fan fiction. And what a fantastic ending. I won't deny that i'm not curious about what will happen to everyone, Harry in particular, now Hogwarts is gone and the ministry is left in disarray, but this is one of those stories where a sequel or epilogue might spoil the impact, so I'm quite happy imagining what comes next for myself.
I've been left wondering about a few things, particularly concerning Harry's rebirth. Has the curse upon the founders' decendants been broken? I'm pretty sure it has, as Hogwarts is no longer there to be a school, but if not, then won't it still affect Harry as he's still related to Ravenclaw on his mothers side?
Is Harry still a Potter? He was reborn using his mothers bone, Voldemort's blood and Dumbledore's flesh, without the use of a cauldron too, so is he not now a true decendant of three founders and no longer a Potter? I wondered about this when it came to Voldemort in the Goblet of fire, would he still be the heir of slytherin after that fitual? Maybe it has more to do with the soul than the physical body, who knows?
Will the new Harry have any recollection of his first life, because on the one hand it'd be nice for him to get a new start, but on the other I'd feel terrible for Ron and the others who've lost their friend. You said part of Harry died before he was reborn, is that the part of him that came after Halloween 1981? Because that would include his bond with Voldemort etc and would seem to indicate a loss of all memories after that time and why he came back as an infant. Also, is he still Sirius' heir? Is the blood adoption, for want of a better term, still in effect?
I'm sorry for all the rambling, I just like having all the details straight in my heard, i'm wierd like that. Part of the reason i like fan fiction is I can ask the authors aboutthings that would ordinarily niggle constantly, many times when reading published stories I invent extra details to get a story to make sense in my head. Anyway, thank you ever so much for such a compelling story, I hope to read more from you soon.
| iamacola chapter 29 . 10/10/2013
I just finished this story and have to say it is one of the best that I have read and in the last couple years I have read a lot of Harry Potter fanfic. Well done. A very good ending even though I didn't want it to end.